|Reviews for Frankencat (a 9 shortfilm fanfic)|
| PhantasyPhan13 chapter 4 . 2/28/2014
A chilling little story that DEFINITELY captures the feel of the short film. I love your idea of who created the machine and why it was created. And the little bit at the end where the machine felt a split second of real fear and the man who created it can't see more of the world and addresses the reader, who is supposed to be 9. The simplicity of the writing and the raw details capture the eerie, unnatural world that 9 is set in and leaves an impression after reading it. If you could perhaps write a sequel to this focusing on 9's life after the defeat of the machine or go into more details of the Cat Beast with a prequel story, I'd be eager to read it!
| GDeNofa chapter 4 . 5/26/2013
Wow, this was awesome! I adored the short and reading this to comprehend why the beast was so obsessed with the dolls was creative.
| eld mcm chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
I really didn't expect the story to bring to the 9 Short's world, Cool Twist! And it was quite inventive of you to compare the event to Beowulf.
All in all I enjoyed it, it handled the Short's tone really well.
| eld mcm chapter 3 . 1/31/2013
So THAT's why It wanted to awaken the machine? Whoa... just whoa...
| eld mcm chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
Whoa... I never would've thought of it that way... GENIUS!