Reviews for a witch's smile
Thunderbolt Blast chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Wow. This is...I'm not sure how to put it. It's beautifully written, in an almost poetic kind of way, and the romantic undertones are subtle but clear and gives it the whole feeling of sadness and creepiness. I like how you wrote Viola and Ellen, especially Ellen. This take on how things went prior to the game is depicted in a way that could very well be canon, and that last line is just incredibly powerful and makes you feel all the more sorry for Viola.
Overall, great job.
Larkawolfgirl chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
That's what I am unable to forgive Ellen for: causing extra pain specifically to hurt Viola. That and leading her to her death. I understand that she scorns the world and why she wanted to steal Viola's body. I could forgive her lying and keeping Viola's body. But causing her extra pain was simply cruel.