Reviews for Psucode Samurai's one shot
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
I think that it really was well written and should be expanded into a longer story
Kmon13 chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
wow this was really good...

Okay maybe a few errors like Hyperdoll now Redeemer being misspelled but other than that it all good.

I also liked the Summer Santa Claws gag you had going and the fact you chose a Dronza where most would chose a Panthress was interesting (Because I could see her getting out of her pokeball hunting town a pink-haired banshee and if Ino read her mind she would be in a fetal position for months asking a question like a mantra "How is she still sane?" or "No one could live thought that."

Shame it was only a one-shot but it was still good to read.

Let me know when you turn this into a series...

Cheers and keep writing...
DPSS chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
You know, I think you should continue this story starting in the pokegirl world. It's not easy to issue a challenge whit original characters after all.
Blackholelord chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
Well it looks nice.
DeathCrawler chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
its interesting will it stay a one shot or will there be more chapters?
red neo ranger chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Loved it keep it up can't waIt to read more
lou2003us chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
It's really good.

You could make it into a story instead of keeping it a one-shot.

Keep up the great work!
Toby860 chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Well I like it.
Reaper1543 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
First off: Good chapter and you should definitely continue it, even just for the lulz. I would like to see how this could continue.

Second: FUCK YEA! Anubust is my favorite pokegirl ever! Ahem, so please, continue this story even if it won't be a main project.
darkistorrik chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
its great to have you back Delfim))
gothicloli chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I know where Kaede came from after all I was the one that gave you the game she's in. xD
Good story like always except for a few errors here and there.
And yes I finally got an account.
TheEternalSage18 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I like it but you should have just had it in the Shippuden part instead.
ShadowBloodedge9396 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Welcome back! I am very much looking forward to your updates.
And about some pokegirl/Naruto fics where his starter isn't a fox-type, I've found two, both by kazikamikaze24. One that takes place in the Naruto-verse where his starters are a Bunnygirl and a Valkyrie, or was it a Gunvalkyrie? The other takes place in the pokegirl verse, though there's a yet to be completely revealed back story of Naruto being born in his world and going to the pokegirl world via his parents' dying wish to Sexebi. Though Naruto is an unwilling vulpine-pokegirl magnet due to Kyuubi, and some vulpine pokegirl legend where he's the reincarnation of their "goddess," (he's a magnet to the point that Hentai dragged Suicunt and Rawcunt to where he was so she could have her way with him. Hinted that she raped him several times in his sleep). However, his starters happened to be a Harpy and a Buzzbreast. Naruto's a masochist, which leads him to be the only one who can live through and enjoy taming session with some ghost Celestial type pokegirl who loves using her spiked chains during the taming. Forgot the pokegirl's name though.
Too bad this is a one shot. Would love to see more of this. I'd take up the challenge myself, but I probably couldn't write a kid friendly story, much less a lemony fic. I might post challenges of my own though.
LordOfDaemon chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
hmmm I'm curious as to whether you're considering continuing this. It's a really good start and I can imagine this turning into a full blown story. I hope that you do decide to continue, and if you don't, well this was still a very nice story.

Avid reader of most literary works,
Furyu Hyoshi
Findarato chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Where you can pictures about them?
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