Reviews for A Pokemon Future (Involves Pearl, Hoenn, Orange Shipping etc)
Drift of the night chapter 17 . 7/31
Hi I am Masquerade of th Dark and I am here to tell you I'm in the same boat as you with the reviews but this storys good
DatPokeFan chapter 6 . 7/20
MY GOD THE BEST even thought it is not in a video BUT STILL THE BEST
DatPokeFan chapter 3 . 7/20
XD It is funny how you gave max a little lemonade
TheHiddenFlames chapter 11 . 1/19
It was one of the best stories I cryed
Ayeun chapter 27 . 9/15/2014
This... Was... AWESOME!

I will be looking into your other stuff soon, and the sequel you mentioned!
pokefan eren chapter 27 . 8/21/2014
Dude, I'm tearing up. This was an amazing a beautiful story that had me wanting more from beginning to end. Can't wait to get started on the sequel.
Mr.Burns chapter 11 . 7/27/2014
Excellent... :3
Guest chapter 26 . 6/24/2014
Uhh the Suicune you described is not Shiny. . /_cb20140210201706/pokemon/images/c/ce/Suicune_
Guest chapter 12 . 6/17/2014
Your detail is incredible and I can picture everything but I want more on the combination attacks (detail I mean) I love that get everything about pokemon and I really enjoy reading this. Some errors though is that because of the system? Or what? Idk
YOLO chapter 27 . 4/20/2014
hey, I LOVE your story; PERFECT

Critisisim time!

I dont think what words like glare mean. Glaring at someone is mean, yet dawn glares at ash at their wedding.

also, when you write someone talking you say someone's reaction after the quote e.x. (this is ash tawking)

"I love you Dawn" Dawn blushed.

"I love you too"

to avoid confusion, write like this:

"I love you Dawn" Ash said to his beautiful partner.
Dawn blushed at his comment, and replied lovingly back to him, "I love you too".

In some cases, your writing style is necessary, but PLEASE! if you can, try to avoid the confusion of not knowing who is talking.

NOTE: this is constructive criticism; I am trying to make you feel bad!

Again, I LOVE this story, and am looking forward to reading the sequel!

Thank you for such a wonderful day of reading this.
nhghtbn chapter 6 . 3/17/2014
Some Guy chapter 25 . 1/16/2014
OK. I'm not normally one to leave negative reviews. But this story was REALLY confusing to read.

I mean, the actual structure of the story is bad, my brain hurts trying to organise the sequence of things. The fact you use flashbacks and memories and whatever all the time really makes it hard to get things straight.
joseph.hendrie chapter 27 . 12/21/2013
hey are you going to do more story are ending soon i hope you stay on the story and i hope you do a lot more chapters too and maybe a few wild lemon scenes with dawn and ash and keep the story going its gooooood i mean it
Brianna Villegas chapter 13 . 10/2/2013
This was a very cool chapter i liked it!
Brianna Villegas chapter 11 . 10/2/2013
Its so emotional i love it it made me cry at the end.
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