Reviews for A Pokemon Future (Involves Pearl, Hoenn, Orange Shipping etc)
Coke chapter 3 . 1/3
I didn't know dey be sniffin' that coke do.(jk I know you mean least I think.)
Money chapter 2 . 1/3
I didn't know if you knew this but the in-game currency for Pokémon is Pokédollars. But if you prefer your country's currency that's fine. I was just making sure.
Ttj1000 chapter 27 . 10/17/2016
I read many Pokemon fanfic like this, but this is definitely one of the best that I've red
PokeFan chapter 1 . 9/8/2016
your grammar kinda bothers me, but I like your story!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/17/2015
Hey, don't worry I understand. Being females, we 'sorta' love lemon scenes but when it comes to writing one, we go into an awkward state... I really wanna start writing stuff and put a lemon in it, but I find it awkward
Death's Angelo chapter 17 . 7/31/2015
Hi I am Masquerade of th Dark and I am here to tell you I'm in the same boat as you with the reviews but this storys good
DatPokeFan chapter 6 . 7/20/2015
MY GOD THE BEST even thought it is not in a video BUT STILL THE BEST
DatPokeFan chapter 3 . 7/20/2015
XD It is funny how you gave max a little lemonade
TheHiddenFlames chapter 11 . 1/19/2015
It was one of the best stories I cryed
Ayeun chapter 27 . 9/15/2014
This... Was... AWESOME!

I will be looking into your other stuff soon, and the sequel you mentioned!
pokefan eren chapter 27 . 8/21/2014
Dude, I'm tearing up. This was an amazing a beautiful story that had me wanting more from beginning to end. Can't wait to get started on the sequel.
Mr.Burns chapter 11 . 7/27/2014
Excellent... :3
Guest chapter 26 . 6/24/2014
Uhh the Suicune you described is not Shiny. . /_cb20140210201706/pokemon/images/c/ce/Suicune_
Guest chapter 12 . 6/17/2014
Your detail is incredible and I can picture everything but I want more on the combination attacks (detail I mean) I love that get everything about pokemon and I really enjoy reading this. Some errors though is that because of the system? Or what? Idk
YOLO chapter 27 . 4/20/2014
hey, I LOVE your story; PERFECT

Critisisim time!

I dont think what words like glare mean. Glaring at someone is mean, yet dawn glares at ash at their wedding.

also, when you write someone talking you say someone's reaction after the quote e.x. (this is ash tawking)

"I love you Dawn" Dawn blushed.

"I love you too"

to avoid confusion, write like this:

"I love you Dawn" Ash said to his beautiful partner.
Dawn blushed at his comment, and replied lovingly back to him, "I love you too".

In some cases, your writing style is necessary, but PLEASE! if you can, try to avoid the confusion of not knowing who is talking.

NOTE: this is constructive criticism; I am trying to make you feel bad!

Again, I LOVE this story, and am looking forward to reading the sequel!

Thank you for such a wonderful day of reading this.
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