|Reviews for One is Good but Two is Better|
| xxxRecklessy-Divinexxx chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I Love it! Continue Please
| David Fishwick chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Nice beginning and will Stefan and Elena be a couple in this story? Please update soon thanks.
| laugh4life chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
This was pretty good! I like it a lot. There is one thing I'm confused with, though. Is this based more off the book or the TV show? I'm guessing the book, since she had blue eyes, but I'm not completely sure. Anyway, I'd definitely love to read more! Please write more. I'm curious to see where you will take this. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
plz update soon!
| SalvaForbBertSon16 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
I like it! i've always thought Katherine was a waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy better character than LJ Smith gave her credit for (even though shes the one who made her lol). Sure there's some stuff you should work on with your writing but that's true for everyone on fanfiction don't let bad comments discourage u! updaattteeee sooon please pretty please! D
| Kelsey chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I think you've got a great idea here, but you need to pay more attention to detail when you write, and employ some common sense. When you begin a paragraph/section with "Imagine if you fell in love." you don't conclude it with "I have." That's what I meant, pay more attention to your own writing. You went from saying Katherine was scared and nervous, to flashbacks that should have been unpleasant if you're actually trying to paint Katherine as sane, to saying she couldn't be happier? Also, do some research when you're uncertain. When you fly, you don't search for empty seats, you have one assigned to you. Airplanes also don't make stops the way buses do and keep letting people off. You have one destination. Some of your sentences are worded very awkwardly and are grammatically incorrect as well. And you mentioned that she was wearing sunglasses and a wig at the end, but that was the first you mentioned it when she was pulling them off (which, by the way, is something you need to pay attention to. Katherine herself pulled them off. That means SHE took her wig off, not 'my wig was taken off' that implies someone else did it.) which came totally off left field.
Good idea but I think you need to refine your writing skills. Keep working at it, everyone can get there with time and effort.
| WhisperInTheDawn chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I LOVE it! :D :D :D I'm so excited for you that you got this up and going! :D I can't wait to see what you do with this story! And I'm VERY excited to see what our favorite Salvatore boys will do with this ;) I like what you did with the prologue too, I know it was a challenge to get it together (Kudos to you!) :D