|Reviews for Night Terrors and A Leaky Ceiling|
| Alison Ocean chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Even though the ending is a little sad, your writing style is mesmerizing. :)
| Tavros'-Yuujinchou chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
This is an amazing story! You did awesome! :3
| ec-writes chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
This read very in character. I could totally see Ed protesting to get in bed with Winry at first, even if the invitation was for totally innocent reasons as the story played out.
| Harryswoman chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
| Dashita Tichou chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Aw... Poor Edo...
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Wow...just, wow. Everything about this was perfect: spelling, grammar, word usage... And a really cute story, too. You ended it perfectly, in a way that was sad, yet fitting. Nice descriptions, great characterization. If only there were more fanfictions like this...Great job!
| S J Smith-Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Ooo, so glad to see something from you again. Good work.
I did have a problem with the word 'mississippi', as that's such an American word, and Amestris isn't America, or even in our world. I think I might've used 'one-onethousand' for the second counting.
I do like Winry trying to take care of Ed, and him not being able to accept it, at least yet.
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Wow this is really good. Just really good quality. Nice.
| VicTheButcher chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I love nightmare fics. Edna's so much stewing in his head after he gets Al's body back, and it's a great subject area. This is probably the best nightmare fic I've read I far. Kudos!
Also, I'm still reading Bits and Pieces. Haha