Reviews for Afterwards
Mari Wollsch chapter 18 . 7/26
great xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Kittens Kat chapter 18 . 2/27
Astrido chapter 18 . 12/4/2014
the idea with the book at the end was a nice touch.
i love the story. bamf john is phantastic.
erik chapter 18 . 10/9/2014
A very well written story.
KAT chapter 18 . 10/4/2014
Your work has been a fantastic read. Completely my pleasure to have the opportunity to read. Most especially the ending you chose. My God, I grinned quite honestly and deeply. I adore the idea that Mycroft would have a library so full of first editions. And especially that he would want a signed first edition copy of John's writing. It makes such sense, but the thought had yet to occur to myself. Thank you. For writing this piece. For sharing your talent for the craft. For giving the readers your art. Thank you.
hatondog chapter 9 . 9/19/2014
OMG. An entire team of shooters in place-including John- and Sherlock in the middle dressed and acting like a bad guy. That may be one of the most imaginative cliffhangers I've seen in Sherlock fan fic, bravo!
hatondog chapter 3 . 9/18/2014
Agree that John would be unlikely to follow through on suicidal thoughts. But being wrongfully accused is c a terrible thing. Seeing the world continue to rip Sherlock apart after witnessing his "suicide", resulting in the loss of his lifeline in life with Sherlock too? I think he'd be giving pulling the plug serious consideration...
Gershwhen chapter 18 . 9/15/2014
Thank you for sharing this! The story was very well paced and I liked that there were repercussions to all of the actions from TGG. You managed to convey a great deal of John's emotion through showing, rather than telling. I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading more of your stories.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/19/2014
Guest chapter 18 . 7/31/2014
That. Was. Brilliant. Thank you so much.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/30/2014
Wow, you are incredible. Thank you for sharing your talent.
seanaface chapter 18 . 5/15/2014
Love this! Just about every time you used "past" you meant " passed"...and the Sebastian grapes and murderess the prostitute chapter is unnecessary. All we need to know about the girl and Sebastian's awfulness is elsewhere. The chapter is vulgar and the girl's thoughts unbelievable in an otherwise very strong story. If you love that scene...cut it and post it as a one shot. It really doesn't help the rest of the story. Thank you for sharing your great story
becgate chapter 18 . 5/14/2014
Excellent and extraordinary story! ! ! I couldn't stop reading! ! Loved every word! !
becgate chapter 11 . 5/14/2014
Awesome story! ! This chapter and the before were amazing! ! Great writing! !
RlyiehChosenOfBane chapter 17 . 4/29/2014
Awwwwwww Sherlock is the only one who can make John lose that mask of "i'm fine" and shake his core to make him feel a wide range of emotions. Good, bad all of it... and I love how you played with that. Marvelous!

Only epilogue left... the tragedy...
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