|Reviews for Book 1 : Demon of the Black Mist|
| Banjo the Fox chapter 8 . 4/11
Hmm... Naru x Fem Haku? Interesting enough chapter, but slow as fuck.
| Banjo the Fox chapter 7 . 4/11
Decent enough chapter, but I was hoping for Naruto to leave behind some kind of clue / Note to cause drama / bashing upon his family due to their actions against Naruto.
| Banjo the Fox chapter 6 . 4/11
Awesome chapter, but I feel this is having a very slow build up. I want to see some action and drama here soon.
| Banjo the Fox chapter 5 . 4/11
Fantastic chapter, I am looking forward to the impression Naruto leaves on Mei and on Konoha when they find out how strong he is and that he left.
| Banjo the Fox chapter 4 . 4/11
More bashing needed plox.
| Banjo the Fox chapter 3 . 4/11
Hmm... So what is he? If he's that old, he's got to be very strong or not human.
| Banjo the Fox chapter 2 . 4/11
Hmm... Not enough Minato / Kushina bashing for the obvious favoritism.
| Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 4/11
Decent enough looking first chapter, this is this guy though? I'm assuming he's going to train Naruto into being a super badass, aye?
| devil122 chapter 9 . 10/14/2014
finally you updated i thought you had abandoned the story ,, i like how things are going in the story ..
thanks for updating , hope you keep writing...
| Tempest12312 chapter 9 . 9/9/2014
I actually just picked out this story and i definitely found it interesting... I like the plot and not the traditional stuff that most fanfics contain with neglect... apart from that the detail is complete as far as i can see so pretty good read... I did spot a few grammer mistakes but they were minor (for eg kushina asks minato " how did the day went?" did and went both past tenses) you have a pretty good start for the story and i hope that the plot remains as interesting... Also on a side note... i don't think naruto would be trying to get noticed any time soon as such putting him in a notable position would not be suited as konoha would want him back at all costs... he is after all a male Uzumaki whether he has a bloodline or not... some extremists might even go so faras to kill him rather than let him join another village like Danzo... I hope the story continues... eagerly awaiting new update :D
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/2/2014
| Killjoy3000 chapter 4 . 6/27/2014
| Wsinno chapter 4 . 6/24/2014
Your explanation is awfully annoying.
| TigrezzTail chapter 9 . 6/23/2014
Well I'm glad you had some inspiration. I know how aggravating it can get. Really hated it when it came time to do my creative writing assignments... Good to see Naruto involved unlike how Takito had stated.
| shadowelf144 chapter 9 . 6/23/2014
sqeeeeeeeeeeeeee tackle glomps author thank you your not dead thank you so much