Reviews for Book 1 : Demon of the Black Mist
Arrexu chapter 5 . 12/24/2017
dude.. a whole chapter just for deciding if Naruto should go to kiri? while yes we already got the impression that he'll go through with it... is it so much to ask for the story to go on. While the dialogue is nice and all.. reading a single moment of Naruto's life in One chapter gets pretty old. Yes I understand that you'd like to be diverse from other Naruto fanfic authors... but pls don't do this to any of your newer stories or chapters unless you plan to make a chapter longer than 30k words. Other wise... I do like your story and style... it just gets boring reading the many reasons of logic, questions etc
Katy chapter 9 . 9/1/2017
Start writing! Chop chop! Get it moving! Btw, love your work! Keep writing!
Narutofan342 chapter 8 . 9/1/2017
Plz keep writing
Guest chapter 7 . 9/1/2017
Awesome job
Goth girl 246 chapter 6 . 9/1/2017
Keep up the great work!
NeonCat chapter 5 . 9/1/2017
Great job!
Anonymous chapter 4 . 9/1/2017
Good job, keep writing!
Anonymous chapter 3 . 9/1/2017
Good grammar. That's what I like to see in a book/fanfiction.
EVIL LIVES chapter 1 . 9/1/2017
This is pretty good. I like the grammar and wording. Keep writing.
Viviandoll chapter 9 . 4/27/2017
Aaawww why the good fanfics are always the dead ones?
Spike91117 chapter 9 . 4/11/2017
Where is the next chapter
my 2 guys chapter 9 . 4/5/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 9 . 3/19/2017
Aaaa! Can you update or at least say that you're abandoning this fic?
Guest chapter 8 . 3/19/2017
Isn't haku a guy?
Nemo chapter 9 . 11/6/2016
Well, to the list of dead fics that I enjoyed reading
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