Reviews for Family
Sar chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
This story is really impressive, you get right into the mind and depth of Johanna's thoughts without talking too much about the history. There is a sense of knowledge already known similar to that of Hemingway's iceberg theory. I'd like to know what she might think about her decisions in the games the last time. Otherwise, very well done, excellent grammar and punctuation.
Oriondruid chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Love this, it is a very well written, well studied and observed character analysis.
Many Blessings.
Oriondruid, (John).
cindella204 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Lovely, as always. Haven't gotten a chance to review the others yet, but I've read them all.

You have a great understanding of Finnick, and you write 3rd person omniscient well.