Reviews for A Heavy Heart On The Boulevard
The North Wyn chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Hmm. An interesting character study, both of Finnick and of your OC. Poor Finnick, though. The mentions of Joanna are a nice touch. You did a great job with a tough subject. Thanks for sharing!
Piano Mirukoto chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
, girl. You can write.
shieldmaiden19 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This made me feel so...empty. In other words, you succeeded. It was chillingly accurate. And I thought you did a great job with third person! In some ways it was even better than your first person: your sentences were much cleaner, and it kept the reader (well, me at least) on their toes to mix up the narrative. I know I force myself to write a third person chapter whenever I have trouble writing in first person - it's good for the creative/analytical juices. *shrugs* Maybe it's just me. Long review made short, I really liked it :)
BaileyRene chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
This story was REALLY good! I absolutely loved it! I thought you did really well at third person omniscient P.O.V. as well.