|Reviews for Dragon and Monkey|
| JanyMarie chapter 2 . 9/11/2013
Oh my I thought I laughed in the first one. This one was even better!
| Howl for the Moon chapter 2 . 5/14/2013
Heehee, this one made me ridiculously happy. Beyond what should have probably pleased me... I enjoy it oh so very much, thank you soo much for taking time out of your schedule to write/post this!
| Crazy anime chick since 1993 chapter 2 . 5/13/2013
I love your fanfics! Callie is one of my favorite characters in the whole wide world and her relationship with Hiei is absolutely adorable. I love her awkward quirkiness and honestly can't wait for the next one shot.
| Leh Star chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
Once again, you've done a great job, and again, I couldn't stop laughing. I realized I like your work because of how well you portray Callie. She honestly reminds me of myself back in my awkward stages of middle school and how bleak a time that was, which is a good thing though it brings up bad memories. You actually made me care about Callie and root for her success since I didn't get such a thing back then, and living through a character is what writing is about. I commend you on making me give a damn. Well done!
However, I would've liked to have seen this romance be a bit more drawn out. I thought the ending was a bit rushed, even for a short story, and the conclusion forced. It didn't flow like the rest of your work. My criticism mostly goes towards how you finally brought them together. Character wise, I do see Hiei merely deciding that they were in a relationship, but not at such a quick pace as you've done. In your story, I was expecting him to grow as a character, learn a lesson, and of course get the girl in the end. And because you've made me give a damn about Callie, I was actually hoping you wouldn't solve all of her problems with Hiei's involvement. I saw that the point of your story was to make Callie realize that she can actually stand on her own two feet and be able to essentially win at life. I was hoping to see more of a turn around for her as a person and have the relationship merely be the self confidence boost she needed to take charge and seize the day.
I hope I didn't bore you with me criticism, but I see your writing having a lot of potential, and I can hope you take my ramblings to heart to make yourself better. - Also, I can't WAIT to see what you have written next! I'm excited!
| Leh Star chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
This was adorably cute! Though a bit cheezy, I loved what you did with your humor and an inventive use of the situation. Very slapstick. Overall, you made me laugh so hard, therefore I give you a nine out of ten. I hope to read more like this!
| kungfupandabear chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
Ah! That was so cute! I loved it!
| CeresMaria chapter 2 . 5/3/2013
Kurama, the biggest cock block.
| Kumiko Seph chapter 2 . 5/2/2013
You have no idea how hard I squealed when I saw this alert in my inbox.
WOOHOO! I can't tell you how much I love your Yu Yu Hakusho fics. They make me die with happiness!
I agree, OOC-Hiei can be very fun XD And adorable! That bit at the end made me squeal XD
| Akara Suzuki chapter 2 . 5/2/2013
That was quite adorable. I loved it. I can't wait to see more work from you including the actual story line for Callie and Hiei. Keep up the good work!
| Just 2 Dream of You chapter 2 . 5/2/2013
Human!Hiei is adorable. Well done.
| Valentines are forever chapter 2 . 5/1/2013
this story is really cute, I don't want to stop reading it. I cant wait for the next chapter
| middlekertz chapter 2 . 5/1/2013
I love this so much! Thank you!
| ChojisGirl chapter 2 . 5/1/2013
I would love to see this be made into it's on story. I'm sitting here just waiting to see what would happen next.
| grislybearXD chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Kya! I love It i know your busy but keep
| dagset8 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
yay im so glad so see your work again. i love this idea that you are going to do with your series. also with this first installement of one shots it seems to me like there would be a sequel. is there going to be sequel? if not so far can there be i just love it to much for there not to be.