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i think this is My favorite chapter. what a lark!

You write well. :)

Darcy is so nice with Elizabeth, this is exactly the type of relationship i imagine they will have after they married.

Great story

Thank you for this lovely story.

Dont listen to people that cant give constructive criticism. In my opinium you can write what you want when you are writing a fanfic. It is your fantasy. I think if a person doesnt like a story they should just stop reading. Dont give up writing. I like your story very much.

Thank you for writing and sharing such an entertaining story! Don't worry about haters, they are jealous. ️️️

Thank you so much. I am really enjoying your story.

An interesting story with a mix of awful and very sweet moments. Thanks for sharing

Twins! That explains the early delivery.

Haha, Darcy being nauseated at the idea of Mrs Bennet staying awhile.

Creepy start

THank you for a loverly story. Mr Collins got his in the end - between his legs. The others lived long and very happilly ever after.

This chapter alone - I got a real problem with it. I liked the original concept and stuck with it until the start of this chapter. I have read nothing beyond that. It is *not T rated*. Don't *care* if it's only a little bit. It violates the T-rating. Please either remove sections or bump up the rating. I only read T-rating or below. I hate it when writers put in unnecessary stuff without warning me first!
Thanks.