An interesting story with a mix of awful and very sweet moments. Thanks for sharing

Twins! That explains the early delivery.

Haha, Darcy being nauseated at the idea of Mrs Bennet staying awhile.

Creepy start

THank you for a loverly story. Mr Collins got his in the end - between his legs. The others lived long and very happilly ever after.

This chapter alone - I got a real problem with it. I liked the original concept and stuck with it until the start of this chapter. I have read nothing beyond that. It is *not T rated*. Don't *care* if it's only a little bit. It violates the T-rating. Please either remove sections or bump up the rating. I only read T-rating or below. I hate it when writers put in unnecessary stuff without warning me first!
Thanks.

Oh I loved your story! Love how Darcy came to Elizabeth and their family together. wonderful story

That... is going to be a lot of children, lol.

This charlotte is actually retarded. Oh well, she deserves what she gets, i suppose.

Sad, lizzy and anne likely would have been good friends if her mother allowed it to be so.

Rip lizzy, fainting at the ball.

Lydia is a stupid, ignorant kid. Not only that but she's selfish as well, only caringa bout herself.

Ya... this charlotte is def OOC from canon. But marrying mr. collins? Idk... i think even if a part of did believe lizzy she would of married him cause she's desperate as fuck.

Wow... nice father, yikes.

Holy a violent collins... perhaps not unexpected.

Thank you. This was superb.