Reviews for Test Drive
Gmp1000 chapter 1 . 1/4/2017
This was very very good!
Daryl chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
fun story to read
Lance Johnson chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
God was this hot! I don't really like gay marriage in real life, but I guess is ok in fanfiction. But you have turned me on to how hot reading porn is! Sure, video porn is great, but just like film, reading has so many more intangible aspects that there's no way to truly show in film. You made excessive use of that, displaying emotion, and feelings, and heightened detail of the environment that brought it to life! Thank you so much, even if I get in trouble someday for reading it!
shysugurl chapter 1 . 4/15/2015
OMG you should make another part to this one i feel like there should be more and also i didnt get some of it but other than that it was great
sakura vampire-san chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
you were right waterwriter-sempi
Cheshel chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
Holy mother of all Satomobiles
babyvfan chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Wow. Ok. Vroom vroom and all that jazz
KORRASAMI FOREVE chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
this was absolutely amazing! if only LoK was on HBO... :P
OTAKU YUMIKURI chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
! They're so frickin' adorable
My heart just exploded.
Its like a peace of chocolate melting in my mouth its just fantastic and I love it amazing
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
:)(: Wowzah...this one-shot is on fire (I know,I'm lame) but, nontheless, it's frickkin' hot and sexy. I love how Asami just took charge and kept referring to engines and all that car stuff. Your writing ability is outstanding. Soooo brilliant. Going straight to my favorites. Please write more of this pairing.
What's-Yer-Offer chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Can I just say I love this?
Piratechief chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Whoop Whoop! Asami take'n charge! Hell yeah! Awesome writing by the way.
icame4thecake chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
I honestly can say this was amazing. You have a very strong vocabulary, which empowers you as a writer. Instead of using simple words, like fire, you use inferno. I really liked how this piece was worded. I truly believe that you are promising as a writer. Fanfiction or anything else.
Nightworldlove chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Oh... My... Gosh... This is, wow... Okay, I'm sold, I've completely fallen for them... You wrote it all so well, I could really picture it, as if it all happened in front of me.
I really ... Enjoyed reading your one-shot ;) Can't wait to read more, this is my new favorite for sure! ;D
W0lfsong chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
O.O wow, I wish this had more chapters

Love it!
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