Reviews for The Place Where the Black Stars Hang
phyrephly chapter 7 . 2/12/2013
Is it Kal's birthing matrix? I do remember something similar from John Byrnes' time. As to this chapter; well, it was most decidedly worth the looks to be quite a gathering storm for heroes in general, Clark's feeling of foreboding could be more prophetic than he bargained for. He really is farmer's son at heart. I think Diana understands that all too well.
phyrephly chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
Not that I am not looking forward to reading of Clark and Diana's adventures here, 'cause you know I am, but this story-ette was starting to take a good grip of me. Just goes to show what a fantabulous writer can do with mere words. Anyways, Polly and that pelekus, man alive (or now most certainly dead), that's one lady not to get on the wrong side of...Clark better watch it lololol. Loved it XD
The Polyethylene Man chapter 5 . 2/6/2013
Nice to see this rolling along. One note though: you start calling the king Carter before Hippolyta does, which is kind of confusing.
phyrephly chapter 5 . 2/6/2013
Phantasically fantastic! Nice long chapter to absorb, and you gave us plenty to be going on with. Shocker, with Polly "offering" herself like that tho'. Loved it how she "humbled Carter after the meeting - the good 'ol "squeeze-the-hand" trick...;}
Polyethyl chapter 4 . 2/5/2013
A bit slow moving to begin with, but I'm sure what's coming is well worth the wait. I suspect I'll like paradise island more when you describe it from Clark's eyes, as its harder to get a feel for ancient Greek fantasy land than run down Smallville
PhoenixRose76 chapter 4 . 2/4/2013
I feel like i am reading something out of Red Sonya. Great chapters... looking forward to more.
SepatownSon chapter 4 . 2/2/2013
you're killin me with the cliffhangers. but you've got me all kinds of hooked in with the story so far. good stuff.
phyrephly chapter 4 . 2/2/2013
"He is worse than that...he is a politician"...lololol XD! At this point, I'd would continue reading this even if there were to be no Diana (grown, approaching motherhood) or Kal. This is stand-on-its-own awsome. For some reasong I keep thinking about Anne McAffrey (Dragon Song, Dragon Flight et al); Dunno why...Ok LD. just take some deep breaths lolol.
phyrephly chapter 3 . 1/31/2013
Bit of an eye-brow raiser there, LD - but then I thought abuot it, and it made sense... I think lolol. This is still a kind of prologue, or prelude to the story isn't it? If it is, I got it; If it isn't...I'm confused, but either way I'm in...hurry up with the next chapter and put me out of my misery lololol. ;D BTW loved the title - even if it isn't what I'm thinking it is. And Helen Mirren soooo could be Gorgo
HELLACRE13 chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Too short! lol.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/29/2013
Oh this is going to be an epic story. DC should make this into one of those cartoon movie.
phyrephly chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
Excellent. Tension is building. This is obviously before Gordo's end in The Red House. Was this some of the reason she was so adament for Diana's return to aftermath of this would have spooked even them to the core, I'm thinking. Interesting times ahead for Diana and Kal...more please :D
phyrephly chapter 1 . 1/26/2013 are a meanie, ending the chapter there LD, but I do like it...:D
CaffeinatedTexasGirl chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Can't wait for more!... I'm impatient feel free to pm me(:
PhoenixRose76 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Thank you for taking me to a nice warm and beautiful place...cause it is cold as heck out here...cant wait to see where this is going. I loved The Red House
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