Reviews for Lost and Found |
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Nibaloo chapter 1 . 7/26/2020 Damn I'm not into this ship but wrote this story so well, I want a sequel T_T |
Leafenclaw chapter 1 . 9/27/2017 No idea why I didn't review this before, it's fantastic. Manages to be completely IC and hilarious at the same time, which doesn't happen often in this fandom. Bravo! Thank you for writing and sharing it! |
superwoman1015 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013 This was awesome. I loved the fantasy of it. The desire. Wonderfully done. |
Kendra Luehr chapter 1 . 3/26/2013 This was fantastic. Your characterization was so spot-on that I could literally hear their voices. |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/6/2013 Sorry-for some reason I don't think my other review posted! This is an amazing story, with both characters being the closest to the show that I've seen. Patrick was so...well, Patrick like! ;) Please write more about this pair, either as a sequel of standalone. What was Patrick feeling when this happened? What will happen after? Did he touch her and pretend he didn't? Great story and writing style! |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/6/2013 Wow, this is amazing! I loved how you portrayed Patrick-he was just like his character! Please oh please do a sequel! What happened after? What was Patrick feeling? Did he touch her and say he didn't? This is a great story, and your writing style is perfect! |
Patrick fan chapter 1 . 3/4/2013 Love love love this pairing and story! Please continue or write more about this pairing! What was Patrick feeling when this happened? Did he touch her, or was it ALL her imagination? |
Donna Lynn chapter 1 . 2/8/2013 Holy Lord this was so good! I've always loved Jane and Graces interactions they have such good chemistry. I REALLY could see Jane doing something like that for her. There isn't enough Jane/Grace anymore even as friends. This was a so good! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2013 There can never be enough on Jane hypnotising someone for me. The contrast was exquisite - Jane sitting, ankle on knee, calm,collected and totally in control of the situation whilst guiding van Pelt to completely let go. Very clever use of imagery - he guides her thoughts but at a deliberately general level so as nothing he says clashes with her fantasies, jarring them, and she is encouraged to imaginatively engage and fill in the gaps herself, thereby arousing herself. Good writing! |
mwalter1 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013 Oh my! I want that to happen to me... |
2mrklr chapter 1 . 1/25/2013 Awesome! What was she going to do on that couch ? |