|Reviews for Artificial Heartbreak|
| machi-pan chapter 6 . 2/7
Whoa. Well, I love Aomine/Kise but I also love Aomine/Akashi. I also love tragic endings. I CAN'T EVEN EXPRESS MY UNDYING LOVE FOR THIS FIC
| KensyEcho chapter 6 . 1/12
NOOOOOOO! It should be ended with a happy ending of AoKise! J-just what the fvck did you do Akashi!? How dare you hurt Kise-bot and Aominecchi and ruin their happiness!? Do you want me to fix that mad brain of yours by hanging your head on the highest part of Tokyo Tower or what!? I can't believe it... With a simple move and it ended with a really unpredictable ending. Azurezury san is really great. You make everything so interesting and unpredictable. It's just... I can hear a cracking sound of my heart upon reading this ending. TT-TT
O-okay, Azurezury san. I really love this Fanfic, honest. Can you believe that the chapter one aside had already brought tears to me? You have a really unique and interesting idea here. Not many author make this kind of story. I love your writing style, too. It's enough to reveal the heavy feeling in this fanfiction. It maybe short, but you built everything step by step so patiently so that reader can feel the development of the story clearly.
Then, I will praise you with the ending. I maybe hate the ending to be like this, but for you to bravely choose this kind of ending is really something. It's a compliment, so I hope you don't misunderstand it. Maybe not a single reader could predict this kind of ending. That the protagonist in the end was defeated by a character who used to be just a minor. Yes, I thought Akashi was just a minor-not important character. So I can believe at the end he's the one who take over the story. If you know manga Pandora Hearts, the mangaka was bravely turned someone who acted as the hero of the story to be the evil one. So unpredictable, just like yours here :) It's great! So I can't believe it only have these number of reviews! D:
Please make the sequel! It bother me when you end it like this. Because... it hurts my feeling to see the evil win the story. It's not right, yes? So I really wait for the sequel. I have think of something like the soul of Kise use the body of Kise-bot to haunt Akashi because he hurts Aomine. Maybe Kise will say something like 'I will be happy if Aominecchi can fall in love with someone else and move on with his life. Or it's okay if I am the one hurted here. But no one can hurt Aominecchi! I won't forgive it!' and then with the body of Kise-bot, he appears in Akashi's room. He explain his motive and when Akashi back away until his back touch the opened window, Kise push the body to the window and to the ground. Lol, it's just my idea. It's okay if you have another but I beg you to write the sequel TT-TT
Thank you very much! Please forgave my rudeness here, I really don't mean it. Keep writing! I'll wait for the sequel! :)
| Fyrshi chapter 6 . 1/1
...Wow, this was such an incredibly dark story that I'm still having trouble getting my head around it... but you know, this was a really awesome story, regardless of the fact that it chilled my being somewhat to read it. I really do feel sorry for Aomine, though, for being played like that and for all of his heartache, but the way you portrayed each of the characters, especially KR-7007/Aomine/Akashi was really detailed. Even though I tend to like happier endings in stories and I do wonder how a happy ending for this story might've turned out, I really liked how tragic and dark the story was... so thank you so much for writing and posting up this story for us readers to read C:
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/23/2013
AKASHI YOU LITTLE BIATCH
This is such a good story, ahaha
| fangeolssu chapter 6 . 8/25/2013
I'm too loss for words. I cannot WHY AKASHI, WHY?! OTLLLL It was awesomely done that I can't help but hate Akashi for doing that to Kise-bot and Aomine. . I just-gaaaah! My AoKise heart is crushed into pieces.. ;AA;
| tsukicchan chapter 6 . 2/8/2013
omg akashi is so-mad :
Go Kise! Steal Ahomine baaack XO
| Colorful Bunny chapter 6 . 2/4/2013
I feel sorry for kise-bot as well as kise.. I mean daikihas forgotten about him, the love they share the family they make everything... It's sad..
I want him to be back as ususal...
| chi-lin chapter 6 . 2/4/2013
Uh... I dunno what to say lol
Over possesive feelings technology could change into make someone forget everything he truly love... Oh well, so in the end this is aoaka? Lol i dunno
But just nice fic, good job.
| angelic-goddess101 chapter 5 . 1/26/2013
Ok so I have to be honest. I'm not sci fi kind of person and I wasn't sure how much I would like this story when I first read it. But I'm liking this more than I anticipated and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
| Awitan chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
;_; I've finally gotten around to reading this and it makes me so sad! Zury, why do you do these things? I read something, I get sad, and the next paragraph is sadder than the last.
I really think you captured everyone's emotions and everyone's actions are so real. I also feel really sorry for the robots themselves. I'm really looking forward to the next installments.
| Midori-Emmi chapter 5 . 1/25/2013
Wow...this is...just wow.
As an author I have toyed with the idea of having androids running rampant as the pairings' respective partners and all. It is not easy to write this kind of thing and I'm impressed by how you managed to pull it off, pull of the mechanics of the androids and pull off the conflicted feelings that arise from the usage of these things. Suffering is not only on the humans' sides, but on the androids' too.
I was reading this entire thing in a trance and when I found out c5 was the latest chapter I felt so crestfallen TAT. Please update soon and keep writing! This is a wonderful piece.