Reviews for Family's Final Divergence
amariecoughlan chapter 9 . 11/4/2015
Why did you get rid of Mexico liberation from hell it was a good story
Guest chapter 29 . 4/2/2015
Love it! Good job!
delete-account-please-6410135 chapter 29 . 3/28/2015
This was so brilliant and could not stop reading this eminent story but I had to as it came to an end.
delete-account-please-6358491 chapter 29 . 2/15/2015
Glad to have located this story. Could not stop reading this remarkable and it really was terrific.
delete-account-please-6354030 chapter 29 . 2/15/2015
I’m glad to have picked this story. I thought it was unbelievable and couldn’t stop reading it cause it was very incredible.
Evil Cosmic Triplets chapter 29 . 2/8/2015
Nice, happy ending. I like how the team, with the exception of Abby, gathered around Tim during his time of need, and was there for him.
Leslie Hughes chapter 29 . 2/1/2015
While I cried like a baby at the deaths of Kristy,Sarah and canine Jeethro, I LOVED the story. I always felt bad about the way Abby treated McGee like one of her slaves and it was nice to see her get what she deserves. I also love have DadGibbs taking care of Tim. Thanks for the story! Helped me get over losing my 25 year old horse on New Year's Eve. This helped me grieve for him.
randomplotbunny chapter 29 . 1/22/2015
This was absolutely incredible!
Momcat chapter 22 . 9/5/2014
Oh another orgasmic chapter ! I can imagine the pleasure you felt while you were writing it and of course that of the other people who read it ! It would be perfect if it wasn't for the sadness of the girls's deaths.. Your style is so easy reading and captivating that I couldn't stop myself from returning to your story every time that I'm done with my other duties … It's been a year since you completed this story, so it would be ridiculous to give you ideas about this, but you may think of writing a second version where the girls don't die and they live happily ever after, what do you say ?
Momcat chapter 21 . 9/5/2014
Oooh the scene between Vance and Abby was nearly orgasmic ! I already hated Abby's behavior in some episodes of the show, but then she also had nice and gentle moments with McGee in some other episodes, which is very disorienting because you never know how she's going to react, i wonder why do the show's writers portrayed such an unstable character… You are portraying a complete evil and egoistic Abby, which makes the earful she gets more enjoyable… But, my God, you made me cry-like probably many other readers- in the end of the chapter… Did you have to kill his sister too ? His girlfriend wasn't enough ? Though I love animals and despise people who hurt them, I can't feel sorry for the dog either, when I think how much hurt he caused McGee and how the poor man was forced to take in the dog who mauled him ! I can hardly wait the interrogation chapter...
Momcat chapter 17 . 9/5/2014
Well, GBTA-Geek, I can assure you that I loved every single line of the last chapters you wrote ! It was such a balm to my heart to read the Admiral having a mouthful from Kort, Vance, Fornell and Gibbs ! Not to mention Abby having one from Gibbs ! Frankly, on the show her attitude sometimes unnerves me so much when she mistreats, belittles and mocks McGee, and it is much more unnerving to watch the favoritism she gets from Gibbs, especially at Tim's expense ! Now since you put Nathan near Tim's room I expect him to cause trouble to our beloved geek, surely the Admiral helping him ! Hmmm, we'll see ...
Momcat chapter 5 . 9/5/2014
You know, I hated the admiral in Squall, but you managed to make a much more hatable character of him, LOL ! At least in the show the admiral was only putting down his son verbally while here he is abusing him also physically.. Having grown with a father who used beat us sometimes, I can hardly feel sympathy for your admiral and the "cousin" and I hope that you'll demolish them later !
Momcat chapter 4 . 9/5/2014
It's interesting how in all fanfics McGee is considered the youngest agent of the team while in real life Cote de Pablo is the youngest, Sean Murray is about two years older than she is...
Momcat chapter 3 . 9/5/2014
OMG this didn't start well for our McGee siblings.. In the episode "Squall" of the show Tim stood more for himself than in your story against his father, but again Sarah didn't have to worry about her father's actions either.. I can hardly wait to read about what you imagined for those three !...
marthapreston4 chapter 20 . 8/18/2014
Okay it from making sense to soap operay and I just want to slap abby silly no one is that self centered without needing a medical assesment the believabilty is gone
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