Reviews for Tragic Anniversary
Say-Hey345 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
(Too lazy to login)

This is amazing, the only thing I would suggest is that you didn't run on your sentences too much. Other than that I wouldn't suggest anything but that you add another chapter before I crumple to the floor and die ;)
MajorBalto 243 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Great job! I'm...Wait a minute! I'm 18 so...I can buy...well, I...nevermind. Great story! Bad Theo! Stealing from a jewelry shop! In broad daylight! Tsk tsk tsk. And screw you Alvin! Alvin and my twenty gauge have an appointment. LOL
Tomcat549 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Good job! Keep it up!
Zootopian Fulf chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
That was pretty good I liked it Theodore realy fucked up this time