Reviews for The clique (Alternate Universe)
Vannaluv chapter 7 . 12/5/2013
Good story so far, I'm so following it!
outside the crayon box chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
If this really is an alternate universe, Massie will be happy with her new friends and not want to take over.
FlowQueen chapter 7 . 11/28/2013
wild and broken chapter 7 . 11/28/2013
So this is great :)
One of my fave stories, you need to update!
all the shattered pieces chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I think amazeballs girl :)
gravity5 chapter 5 . 11/27/2013
I can't read it that well. Can you space out the dialogue by pressing enter each time a new person talks. Everything just looks like one big confusing paragraph to me. Good story, though.
MollieMarch chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
Wow this is really is the exact opposite of The Clique! Ah-some job so far! :P
LTree16 chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
CaptainKale chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
That's cute. I like your jokes. Good sense of humor. I'm liking Massie. She's a nice character.
CaptainKale chapter 3 . 6/15/2013
I love your characters at the end. That's really funny.
CaptainKale chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
With is a great story! I love it!
Guest chapter 5 . 5/22/2013
Yayyyy you got the next chapter up! Love it! Chloe is probably my fave character! :)
kneexsocks chapter 5 . 5/22/2013
I liked the chapter! I really am excited to see the rise of the PC
Awesome story chapter 4 . 5/19/2013
Please keep writing its coming along very well!:)
weaving endless dreams chapter 4 . 5/9/2013
i think that the paragraphs are too long and its hard to read. also, i think this is 2 much like the book, u shud try to make it more orignal, like putting ur own twist on it! then it would be waaaay cooler! (no offense btw)
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