Reviews for The New Body
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
I AM brasilian. I will speak portuguese now. Sorry. Hmm. Eu amei! Muito boa! Você vai faze-la não só como um one-shot? Caramba é muito bom.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
that was very good can you make a story out of this
winterinmyveins chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Agh, I just really love your writing style. The flow of your words is beautiful and you have such an eloquent way of weaving everything together. Can't wait to read more. [:
Stephanie chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Let me just say that I thought this was absolutely fantastic! Your wordplay is wonderful, and you made me want to know why and how this happened. I have never seen anything like this before. Keep writing!1
moreaticcandy chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Wow.. That was amazing. It's so tantalizing!
SheyConYamo chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Oh my, this was a lovely story! I think you are a great writer! Keep it up, please! :)
promocat chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
love the start!need more;)!
movedaccount15 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This was absolutely brilliant. The level of vocabulary and the depth of the description made it incredibly vivid, it almost gave me chills! I really enjoyed reading it— I hope you upload more soon!