|Reviews for In the Closet|
| imagaYthgiL chapter 11 . 1/3
I Loved the first chapter. the second chapter was good. The third chapter to the eighth chapter confused me. I had to go over it in my head and reread it a couple of times until I understood. The time travel completely messes with how my brain processes the story. Lol. The last few chapters and the epilogue were great. All in all, I think you did a great job writing this story. I can't even imagine how hard it must have been to write this. Good luck on future stories. I look forward to reading them.
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/16/2013
awe great story! loved it!
| slyvir chapter 11 . 11/3/2013
awwwww *squaks* ok I'm glad you cama around and finish this stories I truly enjoyed it
| bloodysword99 chapter 11 . 7/28/2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwww what a happy confusing ending! :3
| bloodysword99 chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
SO much feels. ;3
| bloodysword99 chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
that was hot. :3
| bloodysword99 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
It might be incest but FUCK IT! THAT WAS SO ROMANTIC AND HOT!
I LOVE IT! :3
| PhineasFlynns chapter 11 . 7/15/2013
I love it! This is one of the best Timecest stories I've ever read! Great job!
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/10/2013
Oh, you know what? You are amazing ;u; I just can't express myself properly! You deserve lots of love and attention for your work, you know?Because, for me it is very difficult to write time cycles with some cultural and psychological problems and sadly, most of people just stuck on their stereotypes and they don't see what is right here! Well, thank you for your work. I'm looking forward to your next creations!
| KuchiraCrystal-Sama chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I feel so happy and awkward, I'm completely fangirling right now!
| wizard101 chapter 3 . 5/12/2013
This is so sad! I'm actually crying right now! No, seriously. I am!
| wizard101 chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
You made Cornelius kiss Wilbur?! OHHHH, THE HORROR! *faints*
| ete107 chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
This is really a great story! I'm so happy you continued it! And I loved this chapter sooooo much! All Too Well is one of my favorite songs so that's probably why. Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter, this is awesome!
| Omagdi chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
I absolutely loved this story. It was written to perfection and very believable given the actual movie. Please write more MTR stories and/or continue this one. This forum really needs more excellent writers such as yourself. Don't pay attention to the people. If people can't separate a unique, fictional event from reality, they aren't worth your time. Many authors explored "taboo" subjects in their writers and reinterpretations of older media.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
I like the tittle, it's like a pun. But I don't see what would be wrong if it was consensual, like the case here. Both want to kiss each other, no one's forcing or coarcing anyone, so...
ANyway, the fic's awesome.