|Reviews for Beauty and the Beast|
| Hazel Sparks Fly chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
This is a really cool story idea! That disease is totally freaky, and it makes the story really interesting!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
Terrible writing. Go fuck your mom
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
FUCK YOU STUPID LAWLCLAN
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Why not continue
| HakaishinChampa chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
LawlClan is shit and so is this story
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Beavis and Butthead babysit Veni
Beavis and Butthead are two stupid teenagers who are now babysitters. One day, one of their customers was the family of a girl named Veni, whom Beavis and Butthead were supposed to babysit.
Veni's parents left their house so Beavis and Butthead could babysit her.
Butthead: Hey Beavis, let's see how bald Veni is.
Beavis got out a laser pen and aimed it at Veni's head. Then, Beavis accidently aimed it at Veni's eye.
Veni: Oh my god! I can't see!
Butthead: According to our calculations, Veni is balder than a bald eagle.
Beavis: What do we do with her head?
Butthead: We should kick it!
Beavis: Kick it, kick it, kick it!
Butthead kicked Veni.
Veni: Oww! That hurts!
Beavis and Butthead still kicked Veni's head.
An hour later...
Veni: I'm hungry!
Butthead: What should we feed her?
Beavis: Heheheh! Lets feed her a can of beans.
Butthead: Bald people don't eat beans, dumba*s!
Beavis and Butthead turned on the stove and cooked Veni food. The lever on the pan was in a dangerous area. Veni grabbed hold of the lever and got burned a little bit.
After Veni ate dinner, which was beans by the way, Veni was holding a fork. She found an electrical socket.
Beavis: Do it, do it, do it!
Butthead: Put the fork inside the thingy, you dillweed!
Veni put the fork inside the electrical socket and got shocked.
Veni was laying on the floor.
Butthead: I think we need to give it CPR.
Beavis: Yay! PPR!
Butthead: Do I have to kiss her?
Beavis: Uhhh, I dunno! I think so!
Butthead kissed Veni.
Butthead: Uhh, what now?
Beavis: Push her chest!
Butthead pushed Veni's chest. Veni wasn't responding.
Butthead: What now, buttmunch?
Beavis: Slap her! Slap her!
Butthead slapped Veni really hard. Veni responded and survived.
Butthead: Dammit, Beavis! Veni is alive!
Beavis: (to Veni) Wanna play ball in the street?
Veni: Is that dangerous?
Butthead: No, you fartmuffin, it's safe!
Veni played ball in the street. Then, he got hit by a car.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
This is ok I guess, kinda looks promising, but maybe not that good if you keep it going. Sorry dude
| Dawn's Chilling in the TARDIS chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
that was amazing! keep it up
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
| Coqui's Song chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
So I'm flipping through the pages of the Warriors archive, not really expecting anything big, and then I see /this/. First thing I see is your avvie, and then I look at where the Pen Name is, and it's yours. And you have no idea how freaking excited I became. :'D I was like: OMGIT'SVENI ASDFGHJKL and then I read your author's note, so if it's you and Jimmy writing this, it's gonna be amazing. I blame myself for not having you on my Author Alert that I didn't know about it before. Wait. You posted this two days ago. Never mind, I'm /not/ totally out of the loop. :3
Anyway. I love the concept and just everything about it. Bluestar. Yes. /nodnod
I can't really find any grammar errors or anything (Frosty pointed it out, and it got fixed, so), but I think FFN screwed up with the spacing sometimes with italicized words. (I hate that I can never spell 'italicized' correctly on the first try. 8U)
Yeah... I don't really have anything else to say. :'D This chapter is great and I love that Whitestorm and Tigerclaw are frozen. The dark magic of it. I like.
Although when Graypool talks about the favor she did for Bluestar, I kind of expected Tigerclaw and Whitestorm to question Bluestar a bit about that. But then it would've gotten off-topic and blah, blah, blah. Plus the way you've written it, it wouldn't fit very well, so I guess that's good that you didn't.
I also see it's a Blue/Fire fic. I can't believe I still ship this. XD
It's just really great so far, you two.
Okay, so I said I didn't have anything to say, and I said more. This is just a regular thing with me. I can't stop rambling. DX Anyway. I'll tag along with Frosty by saying, "I expect updaaaaaates." :D
| S. Flame Eve chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Mm, this should turn out to be a good story. I was a little confused at the ending there. But surely you have your reasons. I'm looking forward to more exciting chapters. Certainly this was one to be different from the rest. ;D
-Brightpaw of LawlClan
| Flamefrost chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
I'd like to start with the CC first, so:
""Tigerstar, you won't kill her." Bluestar paused slightly". It's 'Tigerclaw' right now, unless you've been calling him by the wrong name all this time. :3
Also, the ending seemed a bit oddly placed- awkward, even. It's a little rushed too, I think, but that's how most chapters end.
I don't quite get Whitestorm and Tigerclaws' reactions, though. It seems over done, with them seeming as though they aren't breathing and schtuff. The comment about their open jaws is a little too much, as well, and it doesn't quite fit with their personalities. I'd think Tigerclaw would have a more aggressive reaction, and Whitestorm would keep his shock as hidden as he could. They both heard Graypool's curse, no? So that would've been a slight form of warning, even if they didn't expect it.
Then it just doesn't seem to fit with what's going on with Graypool and Bluestar.
End CC. :D
I just love the whole idea and how you incorporated it with Warriors! I assume this is going to have some pairing, since the concept is from Beauty and the Beast, so I really can't wait for the other chapters! I'm kinda hoping it's not Oakstorm, just because he's either dead by now, or he and Bluestar have already ended things, so. But I can't think of another cat that could the character to help Bluestaaar!
Definite favorite, so I expect updaaaates:3
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This sounds interesting. Great idea! I love Beauty and the Beast!