Reviews for Silent Sayonara
1sunfun chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Shiragiku-chaan chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
It's sad.
Queen MiMi of Wonderland chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
123 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
the bit with the 'goodbye' seemed very out of place- and especially not very effective after such a long, hot, sex scene_ maybe it would have had more emotional impact if you had thrown in some dialog while they were having sex/love; like- 'i'll miss you'_ 'you are and will always be my one, true love'_ 'please don't leave me'_ 'take me with you, or come with me'...etc

cause reading this i thought, wow- this is hot...and then all of a sudden you write, 'never see each other again'- it was so unexpected that it had no emotional impact on me- other than that- really sexy
lilithvitora chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Maybe idiot isn't appropriate in the middle of a lemon but never the less I in joyed this story