|Reviews for Finding Peace|
| wingsofseyfert12 chapter 3 . 4/29/2014
Interesting so far. While I feel the conversations between Gaspar and Magus could be elaborated a bit more I enjoy what you're doing so far. However I would like more focus on Magus' thoughts as he tries and rescues Schala. After he rescues her then you can then delve into the nature of their relationship. How will each of them take it? How will Schala feel that her younger brother holds a romantic interest in her? I feel that instead of thinking of a grand plot just write the story focusing mostly on these two characters and their development.
As far as the incest is concerned I was under the impression that the community pretty much accepts these two as a pairing regardless. I have no problem with it but, then again, if I had it my way I would pair Schala with Karsh from Chrono Cross :D
| OblivionIsAtHand chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Ah, você é brasileiro(a), eu tinha certeza! :)
Plot parece promissor, mas vou ter que continuar outra hora. Vida real sucks as vezes. Ainda assim, é Schala/Magus, então eu aprovo. :)