|Reviews for One Moment|
| Phthalo chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
You've really touched on the shared guilt at leaving loved ones behind, and the pain that comes with it, and used it to build the start of a relationship. The second half of the vignette is particularly effective. Nicely done!
| Aldenon chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Ouch, my heart when Aedan says, "I just left them there."
This little scene captures so well the bond and instant connection you feel towards Alistair right after Ostagar. Just beautiful, in showing their grief and how they both need and lean on each other. Superb job, truly.
| Shadowfox13 chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
It's been a while, but I haven't forgotten your series. I'm going back to re-read from the beginning (I got sucked into Fenders stories for a while). I loved this little piece, sort of like a portrait of a moment in time. It was lovely. .V
| melgonzo chapter 1 . 1/26/2013