|Reviews for Patient 823|
| OlgaNicole chapter 1 . 3/8
Thank you for this story! I wanted to read something about Peeta's life in Thirteen.
| life according to bram chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
| Katniss730 chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
| Laughy-Taffy the Grape chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
For a fourteen-year-old, Prim sounds very professional. But it was a cool idea.
| Forlorn Melody chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Love the angle on this one. It makes me wonder if Prim had more than one motive for going to the Capitol.
| bookish327 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Excellent characterization of Prim. I can completely see her thinking and writing in this manner. You did a great job at portraying her realistic optimism and empathy for Peeta and also her wanting to take a stand against what Coin was doing in sending Peeta to join Katniss's squad, and her manner of expressing herself all through this fic was very consistent with canon. Great job! Oh, I also like the little bits of humor, such as Johanna trying to calm Peeta down by insulting him. I imagine that she truly DIDN'T save all of her harsh words just for Katniss. :-)
| Prizz chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Little Prim is a rebel herself! It seems it runs in the family. xD
I think Delly and Johanna are Peeta's greatest friends. If, and only if, Katniss still doesn't get out of her funk regarding her feelings with Peeta, I would never blame Peeta if he settles for Delly, or Johanna (if Peeta's brave enough). xD
| Thundarrgirl chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
What an amazing idea. Wonderful and heartbreaking!
| janeeyre54 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
You blow me away every single time. How do you do this? Flawless characterization, interesting POV from Prim, super consistent tone and tempo. Just awesome.