Reviews for Complicated
andrea chapter 12 . 6/21/2005
oh, and by the way, you are the DEVIL of the fanfiction world...so,never write a fan fic again...sucka!
andrea chapter 11 . 6/21/2005
um..well..i only made it to chapter 11 by chokinhg down all the crap you wrote. where do i start..well..the story sucked ass, the characters are way way WAY out of character..and maybe you could've come up with more original manes for the dream people. oh,OH and the way they speak, my god. the "oh my gosh" is used so many times, and you are the poster person for redundance. oi, this story is crap on a stick, and i request you never wrote a fanfiction again until you read the books. thankyou verymuch.
Messy13 chapter 27 . 4/30/2005
Why did you kill Dumbledor? Everybody is afraqid of him
Bookworm.Annie chapter 46 . 3/9/2005
hey wonderful story, im on to the sequel now.
haley21 chapter 39 . 1/23/2005
this story is awesome and i like the way u incoporated the songs into the story..especially since i knew them n i loved the song only hope from a walk 2 remember...anywaz i'm gonna go read the sequel now...i can't wait!
Tabitha78 chapter 45 . 11/20/2004
Wow.

Amazing.

I had chills!

...

This was an absolutely fabulous story! Way too many questions left unanswered, but hopefully, when I check your profile, I will find the sequel to this. If not, I'm going to bug you in email till you do write the conclusion in a sequel lol.

I'm going to be truthful, yes... I saw several typos, and sometimes outright wrong words used, but most of the time I could figure out what you meant. I'm not a fan of songs within stories, but I dealt with it, lol. There were some grammar problems here and there, but I lived with that too. All in all, the imagination and beauty of the story outweighed any problems that could be fixed with a good proofreader (beta).

Awesome!
Tabitha78 chapter 21 . 11/20/2004
Heh. Cute fun fluffy just a touch. And the Draco/Hermione kiss was great.

One thing that I found just a bit disturbing, but it really doesn't matter since you've already finished this story...I can only hope this was the only instance of it...

You realize, you had Ron, a 16 year old lanky boy (no doubt) dancing with an 11 year old? lol I mean, you did say this was Jewel's first year, and you never said anything about her not being her VERY first year, like not transferred, or home-schooled, and a bit older... so it gives that impression.

Just wondered if you thought about it like that.
Tabitha78 chapter 18 . 11/20/2004
He's awake! He's awake! Yay! lol

*ahem*

ok, carry on. lol
Tabitha78 chapter 9 . 11/19/2004
Oh! Oh oh oh! lol, usually when I come across a story that's already complete, I'll just read it and give one really big review at the end. But this has just been building, and building! WOW! And I found myself giggling at Draco and Hermione's comments to each other... and now they know they share the same nightmare...

You've got me on pins and needles! It's great!

Thought you deserved to know that before I finish reading it. :)
FieryInferno chapter 38 . 7/5/2004
super-dee-duper
FieryInferno chapter 37 . 7/5/2004
jewel is gonna die, that makes me sad...
FieryInferno chapter 36 . 7/5/2004
gasp! lucius is gonna attack them when they're outside, i know it!
FieryInferno chapter 35 . 7/5/2004
draco's a dunce, but i think he'll come around. this story is super almost super-dee-duper not quite yet though... couldn't find any mistakes.
FieryInferno chapter 34 . 7/5/2004
sugar is good and so is the story!
FieryInferno chapter 33 . 7/5/2004
that was weird, but still good
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