|Reviews for Complicated|
| EmoPrincess21 chapter 46 . 1/31/2011
| Re-Animated chapter 11 . 1/2/2011
They're acting a little too much out of character in this chapter, Harry and Ron.
| Re-Animated chapter 10 . 1/2/2011
Awesome chapter! My favorite yet. I've got this inkling that maybe Pansy and Hermione will become friends now.
| Re-Animated chapter 9 . 1/2/2011
They'll both be able to sleep now. We know what their dreams are going to be like!
| Re-Animated chapter 8 . 1/2/2011
Can't even begin to imagine why these dreams are important to the story.
| Re-Animated chapter 7 . 1/2/2011
For a first fanfic you did pretty well for yourself. Not many people can get so many reviews for their first story.
| Re-Animated chapter 6 . 1/2/2011
Oh! Looks like someone's getting a little protective about Hermione! 3
| Re-Animated chapter 5 . 1/2/2011
Haha! With Jewel looking to Hermione as something of a big sister, it's sure to make Draco extremely jealous! Can't wait!
| Re-Animated chapter 4 . 1/2/2011
Yes, it was a rather short chapter but I liked it all the same. One thing that does bother me: Jewel seems to be talking like she's older then Hermione, calling her sweetie and stuff. It just doesn't seem to fit for an eleven year old.
| Re-Animated chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
So didn't expect THAT to happen. Another great chapter. They keep getting better and better.
| Re-Animated chapter 2 . 1/2/2011
Jewel is just going to make this story even better. Maybe make Draco look more human.
| Re-Animated chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Couldn't believe this story had so many reviews, I just had to check it out. So far so good. I'll try to leave a review for each chapter. Sometimes I get too lazy. _
| snarkity chapter 19 . 12/10/2010
I'm guessing you're an American. I can't imagine a Brit saying "lata" - or even "later" - in place of "goodbye". Remember, these kids are Brits. They don't use the same slang Americans do. There are lots of websites on Britslang. If you intend to continue writing Harry Potter fanfics, it would be a good idea to check some out.
| snarkity chapter 16 . 12/10/2010
Look, those song lyrics are undoubtedly important to you. That's fine. But when you put the entire text of a song in your story, it's really annoying (and probably a copyright violation). A few lines, fine, but not the whole freaking song. Either that, or warn the reader in your synopsis that it's an effing songfic, 'kay?
| snarkity chapter 11 . 12/10/2010
Okay, two pet peeves here: Fanfic authors who feel the need to respond to every effing review they receive within the chapter; and authors who put lengthy author's notes before the chapter text. Really, your work should stand on its own. It's one thing to say, "Thanks for all the great reviews," and another thing entirely to force your reader to scroll down a couple of screens to get to the chapter text because you individually call out reviewers. Knock it off!
Good story so far, though. :-)