Out of all these orc fanfics I've read, this is by far the single most hilarious story I've had the pleasure of reading. I knew anything exactly what this was going to be about the minute I read the title and synopsis, and boy you sure didn't disappoint!

Poor Mushog... I mean, it WAS rather gratifying seeing the whiny, impatient brat you depicted him as be taken down a few pegs, yet having him broken in so thoroughly reminds me of what I've heard about dressage horses... Those orcs have every right to fear her.

Thanks for a good read!

“We’re all worried about Mushog”...

For a 5 year old, your son has good taste in music!

I loved how you crammed what is possibly every possible fanfic pr0n cliche into 6 chapters. Thanks for the laughs!

My favorite: "Name?" "Tits." Had me rolling!

This story is beyond gross and I'll send my Wargs to...um tickle you to death as you don't want to experience Warg breath. Trust me.

you crazy horny girl...

i have been waiting for years this is better then nothing

Well I might need therapy :D. On a serious note, excellent story

... lolwut

lolwut?

I guess Middle Earth just isn't ready for Dominatixs yet haha! In particular Mushog ;p I almost feel bad for him, what a way to get introduced to BDSM. Just waking up tied up and, "Hey, guess what we're gonna be doing!"
Aaaaand then I remember what an asshole he is and suddenly I don't feel bad for him at all lol. What an appropriate way to make him change the way he looks and considers women!

Absolutely the worst of all...

"Im Luke Skywalker; odulen an edraith angin."

"Star Wars" references in Middle-earth? I thought vibrating latex dildos were bad, but THIS is UNFORGIVABLE.

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Dropping the act for a moment, what a ride it was. Seeing Mushog put in his place was probably the highlight for most people, but Shannon's exchange with Leni is my second favorite part of this chapter. Will she do it? Is she capable? I honestly don't know. She's a very good girl, but Shannon sets the future in some irrefutable terms - and she has put the tool in Leni's hands.

My absolute favorite part of this chapter, though, is Shannon's advice to Nazluk. Because I love that miserable bastard, and *someone* needed to tell him.

Poor orcs won't ever be the same XD Shannon went and shook them up good. I kinda wonder what Leni would do with the poison...but this is the end of the line, eh?

You know, it would be really interesting if some of your characters from different stories ended up in other story lines, even as cameos. It'd be funny and amusing as hell. *nudgenudegwinkwink*

DFC

Hmmm. Mushog's decision- not sure if wisdom, common sense, or cowardice. Maybe both. It may prolong or shorten his life, it's all in Leni's hands now... IF that powder is really what Shannon says. Somehow I doubt she said the truth and the whole truth.