Reviews for The Queen's Champion
8MexicanJaeger chapter 1 . 11/22
Legend
Guest chapter 11 . 11/20
Reyna full name is Reyna Avila Ramirez-Arellano
chaos chapter 6 . 9/18
epic book. :D epic, just epic epic epic epic
marsipan chapter 1 . 9/7
thats not just one wish he asked for
Gidonos chapter 13 . 8/25
Why does every Pertemis story turn Apollo into the biggest dick imaginable? (Pardon my language.)
bryant42222 chapter 39 . 8/21
Hey so I wanted to wait to review this until after I finished reading it. This was really good I considered it a natural progression of feelings. And for once we have Zeus and Hera not being enormous dicks (pardon my language) with the entire situation. Honestly one of the things I hated in HOO was the fact Annabeth became so cold and distant from Percy in my eyes. Actually wanted him to be with Reyna after it lol
chaoseternatum chapter 15 . 7/29
Describe the backflip.
NoSkill4me chapter 39 . 7/22
Nice story over all, very smooth except for the cliff hangers, those are just weird if you are reading the story is completed (which it is), and would be downright infuriating if I read this while it was incomplete. It is done in books to encourage buying the next, but if you can't, because it's not done yet, it will just offend the reader.
TLDR Don't write cliffhangers but otherwise great.
NoSkill4me chapter 28 . 7/21
A lack of reviews doesn't mean the story is lacking.

This is of course not relevant anymore, but for example I myself like to read new chapters in bulk, so I wait a little and fewer chapters get reviews.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/13
Luuurve percymus they're just the cutest
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13
Thanks, It's a great start... I love
noggin78 chapter 39 . 6/24
Magnifique exceptional
Apollo117mc chapter 39 . 6/22
Absoloutley bloody amazing story bro. keep writing!
Magicsteve chapter 33 . 6/17
Is Tyson dead or was he just kind of forgotten?
Milly12345 chapter 24 . 6/13
NNNNOOOOOOOOO JASON!
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