Percy was right, that was a pretty pathetic performance against Annabeth. The whole "Wow she's stronger than me now" seems kind of forced in my opinion considering how many blessings of primordials and gods Percy has at this point in the story

Ending left a lot to be desired, but the story itself was pretty good. I would say its a good read. If anything, im just grateful that the story is at least complete instead of being unfinished like so many others.

he should just boil annabeths blood tbh

Great story though I did start reading it to see some smut from Artemis and Percy. Maybe you could put a label or warning about not having a smut scene.

10 hours ago i started reading… 9 hours ago i fell in love with how good this story was… and now, i’m shaken that i’ve reached the end of this fanfic. i’m so grateful that this masterpiece was finished and i truly don’t know what to say but i’ll still try. this book was incredible and while i had my doubts at first, the twists and turns kept me hooked. and every single cliffhanger was so good that i can’t even imagine how torturous the next days must have felt in between each chapter getting posted. my gods man. it was a simple story, easy enough to follow… and that’s what made us amazing. any age can read this (but i imagine mostly teenagers read it). this was a simply amazing fanfic and i think it’s time for me to read your other pieces…

for some reason chapter 1 goes well with A Thousand Miles by Vanessa Carlton… it’s odd bc i’ve never really put music on while reading these… anyways good intro on to the next one

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It's a decent ending. Not the best, but okay.

Thanks for the hard work in writing and completing a pretty sweet story.

Mildy dissapointed with the way you did Percy here. But I guess he's immortal anyways.

Um, why isn't Percy using water from under the bridge to sweep monsters off? Also, what about the statues that come to life and fight and the local river deities? Unless they appear elsewhere, you're forgetting a pretty key source of soldiers to help Olympus.

Lots of dramatic entrances!

Very rushed chapter. A lot happened, but you didn't capture the emotions in each of the key plot points. You pretty much breezed through everything instead of slowing down and letting the readers "live in the moment," so to speak.

Kinda pathetic that Percy needs to swear on the Styx for literally everything. Seems kinda toxic that he has to put his existence and afterlife on the line because everyone he trusts doesn't trust him.

Percy entered his avatar state.

These fics always start the same. Percy goes missing, usually hestia hiding him or something, hunters catch him after he helps someone, big reveal.