Reviews for The Queen's Champion
Axel18 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Very good. Solid story so far and it's only the first chapter! Good luck!

Axel18
The Werewolf Assassin chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
very good start interested to see more
CourtingTheMoon chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Oh, this is a new way to take him on his own, I like it. You have some great stories here.

Keep it up.
aesir21 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Very interesting story idea. Keep going.
Leftover Meal chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Great start! You could have him find the Roman camp...
FateBurn chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Good start please continue with this story soon.
Ezio Is A Boss chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Great Story as always, and surprisingly no mistake in the description
book study chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
I found it kinda weird when I found out you wrote this since when I saw this, I thought it would be pretty cool that its only 1chp. and already 2k words. Plus I really like pertamis. Then i read it and then thought to myself, hey this is pretty good. Thats when I found out you wrote it and I was like, this story just got a hole lot better.
Dr4gon4life chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
It's a good story so far I enjoyed reading it, I hope you continue to writing it xD
Zon Yokai Blade of the Spirits chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Awesome dude I'm glad you got another story up.
Toby860 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
its a good start. i lok forward to what comes from this.
Tinkling Shards chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Percy seems to be taking the betrayal awfully lightly, compared to what you made it out to be in the summary.

Regardless, a good start to the story., I'm looking forward to see how it plays out.
BlizzardBlader chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Very good
BookDevourer52 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Can't wait to see how the story plays out.
Sobekton chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Well... this is an interesting development. Annabeth is presumably out of the rest of the story? Is Percy now a Hunter of Artemis? or is he just immortal such as the Hunters? It's not exactly clear to me. So Percy is hiding away until he can control his emotions, will he be with the hunters? or is he on his own? A bunch of questions I know, but I can't wait until the next chapter, as always.
-Sobekton
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