Reviews for The Queen's Champion |
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![]() ![]() Very good. Solid story so far and it's only the first chapter! Good luck! Axel18 |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good start interested to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is a new way to take him on his own, I like it. You have some great stories here. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting story idea. Keep going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! You could have him find the Roman camp... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start please continue with this story soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story as always, and surprisingly no mistake in the description |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found it kinda weird when I found out you wrote this since when I saw this, I thought it would be pretty cool that its only 1chp. and already 2k words. Plus I really like pertamis. Then i read it and then thought to myself, hey this is pretty good. Thats when I found out you wrote it and I was like, this story just got a hole lot better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a good story so far I enjoyed reading it, I hope you continue to writing it xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome dude I'm glad you got another story up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its a good start. i lok forward to what comes from this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Percy seems to be taking the betrayal awfully lightly, compared to what you made it out to be in the summary. Regardless, a good start to the story., I'm looking forward to see how it plays out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see how the story plays out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... this is an interesting development. Annabeth is presumably out of the rest of the story? Is Percy now a Hunter of Artemis? or is he just immortal such as the Hunters? It's not exactly clear to me. So Percy is hiding away until he can control his emotions, will he be with the hunters? or is he on his own? A bunch of questions I know, but I can't wait until the next chapter, as always. -Sobekton |