Reviews for The Queen's Champion
Anaklusmos17 chapter 39 . 3/28/2024
I like the how did Artemis get pregnant?
Anaklusmos17 chapter 35 . 3/28/2024
Like the date, and I’m thankful that you haven’t added any OVERLY romantic bits(if you get what I mean)as I was also raised in a Christian he kill Annabeth, and how old is SHE?
Anaklusmos17 chapter 34 . 3/28/2024
I like the idea, but let me get this straight…30 YEARS OLD!?ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND?!Its I won’t kill you bc you can make a killer it up
Anaklusmos17 chapter 33 . 3/28/2024
Bruh, what did you say about the cliffhangers!?I like it, but the BETTER not you , that was a little dark, but what can I up the great work.
Anaklusmos17 chapter 32 . 3/28/2024
You are NOT an ass, plus it was a great chapter!
Anaklusmos17 chapter 30 . 3/28/2024
What did you say about cliffhangers!?I don’t mind, it’s an amazing book so far!Keep going
Guest chapter 5 . 3/24/2024
Should have had him sarcastically say as he was leaving the tent, when he brought Chloe to Artemis, "I'm going to go ger so.e electric shock therapy."
Guest chapter 26 . 2/23/2024
I absolutely love this story, except for the characterisation of Apollo. I really like that guy and disliked your portrayal of him. Apart from that, a fantastic story bro, keep it up.
PJOforever chapter 29 . 2/20/2024
I actually really liked the calmer chapter it was nice to have a more fluffy chapter.
Isaacl112 chapter 39 . 2/10/2024
Really enjoyed this story!
Raylee chapter 25 . 1/16/2024
OMG I love your stories! The cliff hangers are HORRIBLE! But I’ve still been reading it all day lol. I totally ship Pertamis ( Not sure if I spelled that right but, Percy and Artemis) I love Chloe and Sophie’s relationship with Percy ! So cuteeeeee! Keep writing pleaseeeee
Lukoshi chapter 32 . 11/12/2023
Percy was right, that was a pretty pathetic performance against Annabeth. The whole "Wow she's stronger than me now" seems kind of forced in my opinion considering how many blessings of primordials and gods Percy has at this point in the story
Oswald Manvil 13 chapter 39 . 10/18/2023
Ending left a lot to be desired, but the story itself was pretty good. I would say its a good read. If anything, im just grateful that the story is at least complete instead of being unfinished like so many others.
omarbaseer07 chapter 36 . 10/6/2023
he should just boil annabeths blood tbh
StarJem101 chapter 1 . 9/19/2023
Great story though I did start reading it to see some smut from Artemis and Percy. Maybe you could put a label or warning about not having a smut scene.
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