Reviews for The Queen's Champion |
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![]() ![]() I like the how did Artemis get pregnant? |
![]() ![]() Like the date, and I’m thankful that you haven’t added any OVERLY romantic bits(if you get what I mean)as I was also raised in a Christian he kill Annabeth, and how old is SHE? |
![]() ![]() I like the idea, but let me get this straight…30 YEARS OLD!?ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND?!Its I won’t kill you bc you can make a killer it up |
![]() ![]() Bruh, what did you say about the cliffhangers!?I like it, but the BETTER not you , that was a little dark, but what can I up the great work. |
![]() ![]() You are NOT an ass, plus it was a great chapter! |
![]() ![]() What did you say about cliffhangers!?I don’t mind, it’s an amazing book so far!Keep going |
![]() ![]() Should have had him sarcastically say as he was leaving the tent, when he brought Chloe to Artemis, "I'm going to go ger so.e electric shock therapy." |
![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story, except for the characterisation of Apollo. I really like that guy and disliked your portrayal of him. Apart from that, a fantastic story bro, keep it up. |
![]() ![]() I actually really liked the calmer chapter it was nice to have a more fluffy chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this story! |
![]() ![]() OMG I love your stories! The cliff hangers are HORRIBLE! But I’ve still been reading it all day lol. I totally ship Pertamis ( Not sure if I spelled that right but, Percy and Artemis) I love Chloe and Sophie’s relationship with Percy ! So cuteeeeee! Keep writing pleaseeeee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Percy was right, that was a pretty pathetic performance against Annabeth. The whole "Wow she's stronger than me now" seems kind of forced in my opinion considering how many blessings of primordials and gods Percy has at this point in the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ending left a lot to be desired, but the story itself was pretty good. I would say its a good read. If anything, im just grateful that the story is at least complete instead of being unfinished like so many others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() he should just boil annabeths blood tbh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story though I did start reading it to see some smut from Artemis and Percy. Maybe you could put a label or warning about not having a smut scene. |