Reviews for Mass Effect: The First War
Arekanderu chapter 6 . 7/18
Really? Japan joining forces with China? I can see Russia doing this thpe of move but Japan?
Aramus13 chapter 5 . 7/6
... Curse those Batarians and Turians...
Aramus13 chapter 4 . 7/6
Allies and neighbors! And now come problems and death...
Aramus13 chapter 3 . 7/5
That could've gone way bad, glad to see humanity stayed it's hand.
Aramus13 chapter 2 . 7/5
Love the scientific approach!
Hoho, enter the A.I...
Aramus13 chapter 1 . 7/5
Love these humanity, love the Quarian. Let this adventure started!
eliseo200 chapter 3 . 6/16
"I have been listening to the entire exchange between you and Director Locke, and I believe your goals to be genuine." what is he talking about? what conversation? what goals? there were exactly 45 words exchanged between the quarians and the humans before they started shooting at each other...
DanielHimura chapter 21 . 6/8
I am going to stop reading here. I like the story so far, but the creation of the Spartans i did not like. Mcgraw is too dangerous to be in charge of anything in my opinion.
DBNY94 chapter 1 . 5/25
A space worthy aircraft...you mean a spacecraft right? Damn, thats gonna set the tone in terms of writing skill isn't it?
Toothless is best chapter 1 . 5/23
got through this story in Like 3 days. Pretty amazing.
StrengthAndHonour chapter 21 . 5/20
99.9% perfect! My only, and I mean only, issue is your seeming obsession with "as well". There are a vast number of synonyms out there, such as besides this, additionally, etc. I can't wait to see what happens to John-S2!
CReaper210 chapter 6 . 4/26
Humans actually didn't evolve from monkeys. All apes and humans share the same ancestor. We didn't evolve from each other. One life form evolved into different, branching life forms which is why we have humans and a variety of ape species.
Book Nerd Tim chapter 22 . 3/29
its 3 am you bastard. I need to sleep. stop writing good shit. jk. awesome great ride. keep it up.
InflatedChimp chapter 1 . 3/27
Been a while since I read this one, but felt that it was an appropriate time for a reread since NFW seems to be coming to a close.
That said I laughed at the first timeline point. Back when you wrote it it made perfect sense, but now it looks like not only were you off by over 50-100 years but its not even going to be NASA.
Logan- Murder of Crows chapter 6 . 3/21
An antimatter particle beam will do some impressive damage to the target. But if the particles are moving faster than about 90% c, you will have about the same energy release regardless of whether the particles are matter or antimatter. So it's more cost effective to just make a relativistic matter particle beam, rather than spend the money, time and effort making antimatter.
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