Reviews for Mass Effect: The First War
amerikhan786 chapter 1 . 6/8
Humanity here is just Stupid and Cruel, consistency is also completely off, at first you make Humanity way stronger then in Canon then suddenly they are Weaker and get their ass Kicked, you jump between making Aliens kinda fine then they suddenly lose all their Braincells and attack Humanity without reason. There wouldn't be an issue here if Humanity was portrayed as antagonists from the start but you Jump between them being on the Moral High Ground then suddenly they Commit Crimes Of War on par with the worst Nations in History...
Fyr RedNight chapter 22 . 5/20
This was an interesting story.

Your take on the characters as well as the plot was fascinating and entertaining.

Thank you for sharing this with us, I'll definitely check out the sequel.
Warriorking22 chapter 3 . 5/14
Great chapter
Still can't get it out of me that they let the quarians on earth, why not some unimportant colony or ship. Risking the safety of their homeworld just to show trust is quite stupid of them
sakkra chapter 11 . 4/20
Somehow I picture the AVGN, when I read Mcgraw Jr's lines...
Magicthunder1 chapter 15 . 3/14
I wonder how the Sigma operatives would fare against space marines from 40k or if they're what amounts to the same thing.
Guest chapter 21 . 3/8
I know Chris Mcgraw is a troll :)
Guest chapter 19 . 3/8
The word man in mankind is not a genderword, it is equal to the german word Mensch in Menschheit
WirelessDown chapter 2 . 1/28
Of course, this is not such an important remark for fanfiction, but still. Rail guns and magnetically accelerated guns are two different things. Rail guns use Ampere's power to accelerate the projectile. for this it is necessary to pass a huge current through the projectile itself. Hence the name. Railguns, since the projectile has contact with two rails and a current is passed through it. Magnetically accelerated guns use a magnetic field to accelerate a projectile and are called coilguns. In this case, the projectile does not have direct contact with the gun barrel and is accelerated due to the force of attraction of the magnets. Coilguns can also be built at home. They will be quite simple and easy. There is a video on YouTube of a person building coilguns using magnets, a tube and a ball.
Kaiimei chapter 14 . 1/27
Wow...that really put into perspective just how hellish this war is.

The merciless nature of killing a Turian, his mate and his young daughter front-and-center in the story immediately damped down my "Yeah, kill 'em all!" vibe I had after the destruction of New York and Tokyo.

...That was chilling.
6568tank chapter 4 . 1/11
10% lightspeed? oh baby *please*
Verdauga chapter 1 . 11/10/2022

NerouN chapter 2 . 11/1/2022
I have a feeling like I am reading a Halo fanfic.
You should have wrote a crossover. Not this cheap knockoff
Guest chapter 7 . 9/30/2022
You have no understanding of ground side combat. Fighting over New York? Do you know how many ships and shuttles it would take for an invasion force to land enough troops to fight all over the planet at once? Millions! All the while engaged in combat! And having to deal with ground fighters! Look at D day and tell me this taurian fleet could have organized that many troops so fast and deploy without orbital supremacy? Lol dropping this story
tank2u1wood chapter 1 . 9/19/2022
A good series that is worth the read, even 3 years since the last update of the third book. This is a series to come back and read.

ProfFart I sincerely wish you good vibes and fortune, thank you for the series even if it remains unfinished, it was worth the read.

zekses chapter 22 . 8/26/2022
My biggest problem with all this is that turians are made into braindead morons until suddenly only by the end of the book primarch actually has some common sense and the "trial" later contradicts everything the story established about turian mentality.

It's not a completely garbage read but it makes everyone non human a complete idiot to justify and perpetuate its premise.
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