Reviews for Mass Effect: The First War
Jouaint chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
great story so far please continue
douchiesnacks chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
good chapter, cant wait for more!
the metaphysical god of heroes chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
I've been waiting to see if someone could do this I hope it continues
FranticHamster chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
yep did not think the quarian's would take ai very well hope they dont start a war over it.
swemanD47 chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
i think you have a nice thing going, and im looking forward to seeing more
SteelBound chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
Stupid suit rats. Always hated them.

Tali sending classified schematics and info about the First Normandy to the Migrant Fleet behind Shepard's back.

I always sacrificed the Quarians to save the Geth and then Destroy the Geth with RED ending.
DEATH TO THE IMMIGRANTS AND DEATH TO THE IRON MEN! THE EMPRAH PROTECTS!

Hope you nuke the quarians from orbit. They deserve it.

PS: Good story, I like it. Keep it up.
Bluesnowman chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
very good so far.
6thfloormadness chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Interesting story and I look forward to further updates but you need to work on getting the right tenses for words. For example: "Eden Alliance Control, this is Captain Connor, of the SSV Reach reporting." Says the captain. It should be said, not says.
Partition chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
Hey, another Mass Effect AU! Nice. It's far too soon to tell, but this looks promising. I'll keep an eye on it. Oh, and I think you meant exercise not exorcise. Exorcise is what priests pretend to do to people with mental disorders. Well, thanks for writing this!
edboy4926 chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
Good story
Looking forward to more
I so hope that Humanity and Quarians do not go to war.
Garm88 chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
Not bad at all, but you need to work on your past/present tense. Since this is a narrative and not a journal or anything else in first person viewpoint it should be in past tense "said, saw, told", instead of "says, sees and tells".

Looking forward to the next update, should be interesting to see the quarian reaction.
Lay Down Hunter chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
Stupid suite rats
Roku - Molester of Science chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
GIVE US MORE!
I CANNOT HELP IT BUT CONSTANTLY GET THE CHILS FROM THIS!
MATE, YOU HAVE STRUCK GOLD ON AN UNFATHOMED SCALE HERE!
karthik9 chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
OMAC001 chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
Love it. I wonder how the QUarian will deal with friendly AI.
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