|Reviews for Gun Gale Online: Erebus|
| D317 chapter 1 . 2/15
It's good in my opinion so far but as it only has two chapters I can't make a viable opinion on the story as a whole. However I must say that I am pleased with the current story line and I think the only thing requiring improvement is detail (more description of people, locations, and exactly what's going on to be specific). One question though, are the original SAO characters going to be involved in the death game or will they be introduced after the GGO crisis?
| nadia.perez.3979 chapter 2 . 2/1
I think sinon's moniker should be hecate! That fits her better! And also its there a possibility tht a romance bound its going to happen between sinon and kirito? I think they made a cute couple - ohh and also are you going to put SAO characters like Lizbeth, Silica, Klein, Agil or even Asuna and Yui here? It would be cool to see them again here :)
I love your FanFic please update soon :D
| somebody chapter 2 . 1/8
I think you were thinking of the name Subtilizer from Alicization Beginning. Baka Tsuki says it's Satirizer but the accurate translation is Subtilizer. The name is very important and the guy comes back in book 14 and is revealed to be mercenary/specops? soldier from America.
| Yui's Heart Cro chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Yui's Heart (Crossing Field Re-Edit):
| Chosha 117 chapter 2 . 11/16/2013
The looks very interesting, up there with fairy dance of death another great fic. I hope you continue some day soon, I'm facing and following in case you do. This is a great story.
| ragef33 chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
This is LEAGUES better than your previous iteration, Cerberus..
| ThunderBlader chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
nice concept xD
| Dampened chapter 2 . 10/14/2013
Awesome. Wish i could write like that,
| DannyTF94 chapter 2 . 10/4/2013
Such a great and promising story, its a shame that it got abandoned like this. I am following and favoriting in hopes that one day you continue it.
| braidenp2002 chapter 2 . 9/20/2013
Her name should be persephone
| ashfear chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
nice keep writing ur doing a good job out of all the fan fictions i read this is the best dident think u had to rewrite it though but just keep doing what ur doing:}
| treeofsakuras chapter 2 . 8/27/2013
I really like the story, there aren't many kiritoxsinon fanfics, so great to read one that has a great potential.
Please update soon XD XD
| Nero The Insane chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
Sion moniker? Athena? duno. oh, WHEN DOES THE NEXT ONE COME OUT? THERE SO GOOD!
| TheHarbringerofDeath chapter 2 . 8/16/2013
please continue on soon because this looks really good
| NA Vina chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
Ahem...now i finish reading the Cerberus reviews the moniker is pretty much said unless you want to use god from a few more place's. Now that i remember about the Uzi thing yes why don't klein use sub machine gun its light and have crap amount of ammo's just crappy damage. The shotgun idea also work since normally with a shield you can get close and shotgun is a close rang gun. In Cerberus no matter what kirito said people just thing he is girl even thou he said i'm a guy & there is no way to prove it unless the anti hentai code or he strips(which will never happens unless the girl gang on him). i agree which the guy who say secreted dungeon but not with the OP weapon but more like a extra skill or a special NPC which can trigger more hidden dungeon and more quest which can gain them some extra skills and items(Sinon was walking and trip and pull kirito along with her and they fall down to a cave where their is alot of high lvl mobs & no way back so they fight to the end of the cave which beholds a NPC or NPC's like a small village and they can have special weapon enhance or buy or quest or extra skill) something like that but not too OP since its still the beginning of the game. Their is also chain quest like the 1 in counter guardian fanfic. Even if kirito have his divinity agin i beat catus head will come and tell some beater crap so kirito can ether go aggressive on it or passive and let agil come in again or just skip it and 2 man army the boss. Since this is not fantasy its mutant and machine world so silca should be together with pina again its just what kind of mob should it be. in the world of GGO its said about galaxy and stuff so other unknown creature like dragon can still appear or another form of dragons, SNAKE_ something like that. Agil would carry a machine gun since Axe is heavy atk weapon so machine gun should suit unless you have rocket launcher_ which can the the hidden quest reward a 1 time rocket launcher_. Nemesis the black queen/Queen of Oblivion_ more like girly kirito then sinon_.Sinon should try hecate since she do use that gun. Depending on if people mistake kirito to be a girl or guy he may be name Queen nemesis or return to his Thanatos nickname for bullet slicing for beta people so he shouldn't be call Thanatos with his new looks so unless they found out he's a beater and can slice bullet or people like Solider Satrizer. so other then that he shouldn't be returning to his beta moniker so he may reclaim Hades yet again_but i really want to moniker hades again thou it only suit him when he's mad like hell_ll but i really would be happy if you stop abandoning your story and stop half ways since good story never last long unless its the "Sword Art Online Final take"77chapters_. for monikers Keres/Ker(Fate of Death)sister of Thanatos & moros & nemesis and is some hwat relate to Ebrebus's like cousin) with Moros(Doom) so if you don't care about the gender part mores some what fit sinon since she have the gun that brings doom to player and mobs in which kirito's G4 also fits. But if kirito is mad for revenge i would agree for nemesis/ Adrasteia since kirito who looks like a girl is somewhat OP and if he wants to hunt someone down that player or mob will 100% go down unless your a game creator then you have a 80% of going down. Yea kirito is some ok as Ker since ker when down to hades and is friend with cerberus so if its relate to the 1st 1 it should make sense. More is son of nyx which is sister of erbus so i say Moros if you don't care about the gender.