|Reviews for Affair's Of The Heart part 1|
| CocoRocks chapter 1 . 4/28/2019
Please write more this seems like a good story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2017
Please write more, I think this could become a Really Good Story
| mrs.derekmorgan chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
this is really good i cant wait till its updated
| Kay chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
It's a good enough story line only have you ever considered getting a Beta Reader? This is full of errors. One example:
''Joe do you think you could give me a hand with the book's today" It should be: "Joe, do you think you could give me a hand with the books today?"
If you care about your writing, and want to provide something a reader can enjoy, I suggest you look into getting someone to help you with your punctuation and spelling. (You typed tounge...it is TONGUE)