|Reviews for Hoarse|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/10
It that it? Are you planning on creating more I'd love to see more, you've made me curious
| CreggaFoeseeker chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
keep giong. wait, you listed this under "humor"? alright, hope it gets funnier
| senakoreas chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
How will Hal, Aya and Kilowog deal with this?
Looking forward to the second chapter!
| I Am the 1st Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
"but then I thought that we Fanterns had suffered enough today without needing another painful cliffhanger."
and this was supposed to make me feel better? or no?...cause i'm sayin' no :
| Sounddrive chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Oh man, of all the things they have to go through! DX
Very interested to see how this'll unfold.
| Sueanoi chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
I'm definitely going to follow this story!
| NightWhisper184 chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Ohh! I cant wait to see what happens next! Excellent start :)
| Magnusrae chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I am really glad you decided to post a more humorous story after the episode we all had to endure on Saturday. I think you had the dialogue spot on; especially in the beginning where Hal was 'dying of boredom', but really it was good throughout the chapter. Mr. Smiles was a good creation, well described, and how like Hal to name the thing. I look forward to reading more!
| geekychic1999 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Update please. I'm pouring over all the FANFIC where Aya isn't dead. I don't know why spell check capitalized FANFIC. Please update soon I like this story. I am glad that I am the only one who has lost the ability to write after Saturday.
| Crying Fantern chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Cheers on a nice first chapter. I can't wait to read another, and be distracted for a short while longer from the cruelty of Giancarlo. Please update soon!