Reviews for A Grey Justice on the Horizon
Guest chapter 10 . 10/25
This is amazing. Magneto is one of my favorite comic book characters of all time, so seeing even a slight reflection of that in a fic is always nice. I hope you update again soon!
Brady420 chapter 10 . 10/14
I think he should get powerful enough to where if the league comes after him with everything they've got he can either come up with sum tech for each one or get antibiotic metal and kryptonite metal and stuff or he get powerful enough to absolutely control earths magnetic field and threaten to destroy it If they don't back off because there would be no counter for that or make him as powerful or more than magneto was in xmen Apocalypse also love the iron sand idea it's so bad ass and would be awesome for him to have certain metals as the metal beads for different situations spoke magic, kryptonian, or vibranium like captain America's shield to fight against super strength also maybe have him get sum pins or some thing implanted so he always has something metal on him for emergencies any ways I love your story and that's being Sanders dad is cool also I think he should become a government sanctioned anti hero meaning governments pay him to put down super villains who are to dangerous or insane to continue living
Guest chapter 10 . 9/18
good work like to see it updated hope we see a new one soon!
Guest chapter 9 . 9/6
And /that/ is a big part of why Ra's is not only still alive (****ing Lazarus Pits) but so damn powerful. Even in a position of supposed greatest weakness he can find a way to use those who would kill him sooner than hep him to "fix" other problems for him- play his problems off each other and let them solve themselves.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/5
*huffs* Pissing off Lensherr's (whether they accept and use the name or not) is generally very bad for your health. Well, pissing them off is bad for your sanity, /enraging/ them is very very bad for your health. XD
Guest chapter 7 . 9/5
Just a note, your usual scene and setting headers/breaks mostly escaped this chapter.

*cackles* NINJAS. Considering all the other crazy shit they've seen, even in only the canon Buffy-verse, I suppose it was only a matter of time... Combining a DCU and Sunnydale's universe? I feel very bad for a lot of people, our poor Xander included. You are quite impressive, Master.
mj4wzpw chapter 10 . 8/31
lmao Xander's a trouble magnet literally hahaha :P
anyway this story rocks! this chapter was awesome as all chapters have been so far!

(ノヮ)ノ*:・゚ Thank you for the chapter!゚・: *ヽ(ヮヽ)
mj4wzpw chapter 1 . 8/31
Didn't know you posted your story on this site aswell as tth, but i'm glad you do cause now i can review i love this story!

(ノヮ)ノ*:・゚ Thank you for the chapter!゚・: *ヽ(ヮヽ)
Smokeing chapter 10 . 8/28
Very good story enjoyed it very much looking forward to updates
Umbra.Venator chapter 10 . 8/27
Awesome chapter, looking forward to the reunion of the Scooby Gang :)
Guest chapter 10 . 8/23
Too many Kanes, too many Artemises. Not your fault really, but still. What's a "Trench goat?" And X. Accidentally recreating an inversion of the fruit of the poisonous tree? Admittedly it does look pretty bad from the outside.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/22
Very good
Guest chapter 10 . 8/22
Glad to see this story continued! Keep up the good writing!
bigmeaty69 chapter 10 . 8/21
Loving this story! thanks for the update
Byakugan789 chapter 10 . 8/20
Enjoyable chapter.

2 things though.

1; Xander DOES in fact have, in his head, something that could give Cordy total control. It's just that the magneto in him would hate it. Genosian mutant suppression collars. These things could stop Storm and Colossus from using their powers. Talks about normally unstoppable forces. Give cordy one that could either be thought activated or something else subtle and easy to switch but hard to accidentally activate and she's golden. the only downside is negated by the rarity and proper anonymity of mutants in this reality.

2; The fight with barda, knockout and the furies (why preface it with female? Furies are always female, in the myths and like every other fanfiction to use the name. crazy comic writers) was pretty damn good, but why the blast did barda just let the last one go home? death of unconsciousness and then take their mother-boxes. Team is written off as dead and with no returning warriors to give the location of the retreat the search will take quite alot longer than is needed to disappear.
sure, if you didn't kill the other furies, simply knocking them out they'd end up as a rogues gallery, but at least they can't phone home and bring the army with them.
and little miss redheaded wolverine there seems like she'd like that, while both of them fear the army.
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