Reviews for The Ninja Keyblade
draco7347 chapter 4 . 8/25
love it
ultima-owner chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
When talking fails, beats some sense into the person
dfozerker chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
Not that the story's bad, it just seems like you're rushing through the story a bit, like putting Naruto in worlds and quickly dealing with them in short chapters. Try to make them longer if you can
gamelover41592 chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
that was good
snikpmot1994 chapter 3 . 5/17/2013
Awesome fanfiction! Can't wait to read the next chapter, so keep up the good work!
NecroSaintCreed chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
the perfect one would be to use rise of the guardians due to the whole pitch black being the boogeyman and him fighting along side Jack Frost and all that I would also suggest using 4-5 sentences to help describe things and delve more into imagery and other figurative language as the best way to keep a readers attention is the use of figurative language maybe also get a beta to add some clean up to your chapters ill be reading and waiting for further chapters
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gamelover41592 chapter 3 . 4/7/2013
so what's the timeline?
ultima-owner chapter 3 . 4/7/2013
Naruto doesn't have as much skill in magic as Aqua has because she uses magic more than physical attacks and he's still got a ways to go
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 3 . 4/7/2013
Cool:)
ultima-owner chapter 2 . 4/7/2013
Not too bad with the fights
seeker of true anime fan fic chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
How ciyy some of the studio gibili films like princess monenoke secret world of ariety and nasucaa valley of the wind others like Atlantis the lost empire princess and the frog rise of the guardians or even wreck it Ralph would do now for Disney shows try Kim possible lilo and stich proud family or tron uprising too let's see how the harem comes to place here
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 2 . 4/7/2013
Interesting:)
gamelover41592 chapter 2 . 4/7/2013
will naruto run into his other friends?
negi8820 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I love the idea but I have no idea what is going on. None of the sentences are making any sense at all. And you rushed through the chapter. You basically said " ninja naruto. Sage, keyblade, new world, friends, leaves world." Like what? You just jumped all over the place. Anyway good luck
Deathgeass chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
naruto and aqua an this is a good story! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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