|Reviews for play date (ryuichi x shuichi)|
| D.Gray-Stuck chapter 1 . 3/1
You need to capitalize their names. I suppose it was good and all, nice storyline. But your grammar needs to be worked on , I'm sorry.
| EmoViolet18 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Aww that was super KAWAII! :D 3
| HellsBellsGeek1701 chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
AH! i love it! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEASE make a next chapter! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE?! Pretty Please with sugar on top? o.o *grabs hold of you leg (like a five yr old) and refuses to let go, screaming "PLEASE" the whole time* :3