Reviews for Her Last Breath
mama4dukes chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Wow...very dark...very, very dark, but poignant. At least she died happy. :D Loved it, you did a great job!
bamagal110 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
So EDward is the one who is killing her, is she dead or changing?
LuckyStar0489 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
I'd actually be really interested in reading a full story about how this began!
amaris12345 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Good to see you back hun. good story...short...but sweet...

Jesus I really, really hate eddward...grrrrrrr...and this o/s is not helping matters...lollll...and thank you for showing bella as teh pathetic creature that she can be...not helping me like her either...heheheheheh

welcome back...

x
slc6548 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Wow - way to make a re-entrance!
teamhotmen chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Oh wow that was just such a twist in the tale I loved it

Hugs xxx
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
oh wow why did Edward have red eyes what had happened? Why did he just bite her and didn't drain her to her death? just wow this isn't good so know who is she to go to and learn the ways
hapakids chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
As I told you before its good and the twist in it yeah... wasn't expecting who it ends up being!
roon0 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Awesome one shot.
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Sad. I am glad you address the monster in them all because no one really does. Edward has a monster who craves Bella's blood and it is just a matter of time before the monster took over. All the beautiful words of love meant nothing to the monster only the wonderful smell of blood.

Very good. Well written.
LuvinTwilight143 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
That was so sad :(
flamingpen18 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Holy freakin' shock, Batman. I never expected that!