Reviews for Unexpected Reality
Wanderingheartbroken chapter 4 . 6/5/2013
It seems like you have a very good idea for a storyline, but I would highly encourage you to get a beta to look over it... there are words missing, spelling issues, grammar issues... having a beta look over this would make your story a lot easier to read.
Wanderingheartbroken chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
Be careful about your verb tenses, like "... have runned..." (from a previous chapter) should be either "ran" or "have run" (I'm pretty sure you want to use run, in that case) and also "... gently spined..." careful about spelling... I don't know what a spine has to do with anything, but "spinned" wouldn't be the verb you want either: it should be "spun..." Might want to have a beta check this story out, just to help make it flow better.
rjt040190 chapter 28 . 3/19/2013
That was pretty incredible! :)))
LOVE LOVE LOVE

I cant wait to read your new fic. :D

rjt040190
rjt040190 chapter 27 . 3/19/2013
cries... cries...
Sniffles...
:)))
its SO BEAUTIFUL! 3

That was 1 AMAZING ride, thank u so

rjt040190
bonesbemmettlover chapter 28 . 3/17/2013
Awwww...beautiful ending!:)
bonesbemmettlover chapter 27 . 3/17/2013
Soooooooooooo SWEET!
Guest chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
so beautiful! i need more pls!
bonesbemmettlover chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
Wow oh wow! Continue please!
WriterFreak001 chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
loved it! Is there more? lol
Romanian Bookworm chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
in all honesty, I feel like this is the perfect ending. although you could put one more chapter up as an epilogue :)
rjt040190 chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
Awwwwww
sooo beautiful...
cries... sniffles...

PLEASE continue..

rjt040190
Scotsfangirl chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
i would love to read a second part to this story...i really don't want it to end :-)
Megrock7 chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
Loved this chapter! So sweet
Scotsfangirl chapter 25 . 2/28/2013
what about the engagement ring really being from vincent?
caritosec chapter 25 . 2/28/2013
OMG! at last, it was perfect! )
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