|Reviews for Unexpected Reality|
| Wanderingheartbroken chapter 4 . 6/5/2013
It seems like you have a very good idea for a storyline, but I would highly encourage you to get a beta to look over it... there are words missing, spelling issues, grammar issues... having a beta look over this would make your story a lot easier to read.
| Wanderingheartbroken chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
Be careful about your verb tenses, like "... have runned..." (from a previous chapter) should be either "ran" or "have run" (I'm pretty sure you want to use run, in that case) and also "... gently spined..." careful about spelling... I don't know what a spine has to do with anything, but "spinned" wouldn't be the verb you want either: it should be "spun..." Might want to have a beta check this story out, just to help make it flow better.
| rjt040190 chapter 28 . 3/19/2013
That was pretty incredible! :)))
LOVE LOVE LOVE
I cant wait to read your new fic. :D
| rjt040190 chapter 27 . 3/19/2013
its SO BEAUTIFUL! 3
That was 1 AMAZING ride, thank u so
| bonesbemmettlover chapter 28 . 3/17/2013
| bonesbemmettlover chapter 27 . 3/17/2013
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
so beautiful! i need more pls!
| bonesbemmettlover chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
Wow oh wow! Continue please!
| Keiko Fujiwara chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
loved it! Is there more? lol
| Romanian Bookworm chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
in all honesty, I feel like this is the perfect ending. although you could put one more chapter up as an epilogue :)
| rjt040190 chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
| Scotsfangirl chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
i would love to read a second part to this story...i really don't want it to end :-)
| Megrock7 chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
Loved this chapter! So sweet
| Scotsfangirl chapter 25 . 2/28/2013
what about the engagement ring really being from vincent?
| caritosec chapter 25 . 2/28/2013
OMG! at last, it was perfect! )