Reviews for Unexpected Reality
EG chapter 28 . 6/1/2016
This is such a beautiful story I have been reading a lot of fanfic and this one is at the top of my list you are a good writer this I know because I have read over hundreds of them thank you
xpetti 4Bemer chapter 28 . 1/22/2016
Excellent writing. I love the way you have the cat and vincent pov.
xpetti 4Bemer chapter 5 . 1/22/2016
love it. keep going!
Wanderingheartbroken chapter 4 . 6/5/2013
It seems like you have a very good idea for a storyline, but I would highly encourage you to get a beta to look over it... there are words missing, spelling issues, grammar issues... having a beta look over this would make your story a lot easier to read.
Wanderingheartbroken chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
Be careful about your verb tenses, like "... have runned..." (from a previous chapter) should be either "ran" or "have run" (I'm pretty sure you want to use run, in that case) and also "... gently spined..." careful about spelling... I don't know what a spine has to do with anything, but "spinned" wouldn't be the verb you want either: it should be "spun..." Might want to have a beta check this story out, just to help make it flow better.
rjt040190 chapter 28 . 3/19/2013
That was pretty incredible! :)))

I cant wait to read your new fic. :D

rjt040190 chapter 27 . 3/19/2013
cries... cries...

That was 1 AMAZING ride, thank u so

bonesbemmettlover chapter 28 . 3/17/2013
Awwww...beautiful ending!:)
bonesbemmettlover chapter 27 . 3/17/2013
Soooooooooooo SWEET!
Guest chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
so beautiful! i need more pls!
bonesbemmettlover chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
Wow oh wow! Continue please!
WriterFreak001 chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
loved it! Is there more? lol
Romanian Bookworm chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
in all honesty, I feel like this is the perfect ending. although you could put one more chapter up as an epilogue :)
rjt040190 chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
sooo beautiful...
cries... sniffles...

PLEASE continue..

Scotsfangirl chapter 26 . 3/4/2013
i would love to read a second part to this story...i really don't want it to end :-)
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