|Reviews for An offer you cannot refuse|
| Robert Teague chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
Nice to see Adrena Lynn in a story again. And working for Dementor? Freaky!
You have this marked 'complete', but I hope there is more coming.
I'd really like to see a battlesuit-enhanced Lynn against Kim. I just hope Dementor isn't going after the PAN DIMENSIONAL VORTEX INDUCER! again.
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
Hey, cool stuff here, and nice idea about making Lynn a serious threat.
Keep the good writing.
| Sentinel103 chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
So this three chapter little ditty is a prelude to something bigger?
Interesting, I wonder though if Demez has thought about the sidekick yet and if he has will he contact a certain English nobleman to ensure that the blond goof doesn't upset his plans.
| CajunBear73 chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
Ah, that's all well and good, but how far along is this in the KP-time stream...?
And has Ron become something that neither Kim's Super Suit or Dementor's new Fusion Armor could overcome? If not, then Kim's got problems.
But either way, Ron could step up monkey-style before he was supposed to if Lynn could beat Kim that badly...
| CajunBear73 chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
Yep, someone was after her, alright...
| CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Hmm, wonder what's up with this...?