Reviews for Bloodlines
soniyamalik444 chapter 16 . 4/3
let me point out some mistakes.. Akio as naruto and sakura son is 12 in this and kitai is 16 but akio was born when kitan is 6 so how he is now 12? and when sasuke left hinata they were 19 and after six years they are like 25 or 26 so right now they are in there's mid thirties so why hinata feels old? and if I'm 16 and I'm going to be a sister so that was soooooo embarrassing for me and i know kitai's going to be a big sister soon..
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 24 . 8/30/2016
I love Jinsei and Kitai! SasuHina as well, but their daughter with Gaara's son is just perfect! I really enjoyed reading this fanfic :D
Dalisay08 chapter 24 . 8/21/2016
awww I like the idea of sasuhina's daughter x gaara's son... its soo cute... anyway I like the whole story!
gabrielleannele chapter 24 . 4/29/2016
Guest chapter 2 . 10/18/2015
I've read a lot of your stories and I feel like your Hinata is usually very, very OOC. Most of the time I feel like RTN!Hinata or Ino would fit the role better. :/ That you're only using Hinata because of family things. I don't know. That being said, you have lots of interesting stories and premises and you've finished a lot of your stories so that's a wonderful thing.
funkirican chapter 24 . 9/27/2014
You write the best sasuxhina stories. I feel like every time I read a good one the author ends up being you. Great work!
372259 chapter 3 . 6/25/2014
WHAT AN INCREDIBLE CLIFF HANGER! My face is pasted onto the screen! I am really loving this story, good job! :)
Guest chapter 10 . 6/20/2014
i like it when hinata is shy...she seems to be so hypocrite in this fiction
77Rose chapter 16 . 1/5/2014
omo, im reallly enjoying this
Guest chapter 21 . 1/1/2014
Sasuke is not dead. No. Absolutely not. I dare you to kill him off. I dare you. Him and Hina-chan are getting married.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/31/2013
Why do you say tsundae? It's Tsunade lol
Guest chapter 11 . 12/31/2013
Well obviously that lady was Karin…
Guest chapter 5 . 12/31/2013
I love the story but what I hate, and I'm not sure when this was written or how much you know about the naruto-universe, but sharing and aren't just activated that way. While I like the creativeness you added with adding that you had to get used to controlling the byakugan, etc., an Uchiha's sharingan activates when that person loses someone they love or have strong feelings for or strong connections with, hence the emphasis on [lost/breaking] bonds.
natalia chapter 24 . 12/15/2013
realmente amei sua historia muito humor romance sasuhina adorei a filhas deles foi maravilhoso pena que acabou ... parabéns fazia tempo que ñ lia uma historia tão bem escrita estou sendo repetitiva mas realmente ameiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii mesmo seu fanfic
nura chapter 24 . 11/19/2013
that is sooooooooo cute the thing between kitai and jinsai
thank u 4 riting dis story -
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