Reviews for Superboy and the invisible girl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You keep changing Simon's name to Luke. Why are you doing that? |
![]() ![]() Love this story! Please don’t change it. It has just the right amount of suspence. Please tell us who it was taking pics. I like Simon as a stalker so understated for a. |
![]() ![]() This story is really good and I would luv to read it if you continued. You are a great author️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz update |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOO JUST ADD MORE CHAPTERS IT WAS GREAT ALREADY DONT REWRITE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes you should rewrite it! It was good the first time around but you should never stop improving and this is an awesome opportunity to see how far you've come in your writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would be perfectly okay with you rewriting this. |
![]() ![]() UPDATE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() plz update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read thus story and you havent changed all the Luke's to Simon's and its kinda confusing but i still LOVE this story! |
![]() ![]() Jace and Clary are adorable in this chapter! I hope they find their stalker and Jace will always be there to protect Clary no matter what! Please update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! Not Simon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() why you make simon a creep I want the old simon back even through he does have confidence to ask a girl out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh! I love this story...more, please! |