|Reviews for Under the Covers|
| lightpoint chapter 1 . 3/18/2016
IGNORE the flamers. This was extremely well done. The way you handled the POV was stellar, seriously. I really think you nailed it regarding his motivations and perceptions regarding Alexis. Well done!
| The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Not only are “you” based stories are not allowed, you’re also a paedophile. Oh, that’s right. I went there.
You keep describing your male OC as a boy, and not a man, and God knows whatever turns you on at night. Not only do you write Palpatine as this sick fuck paedophile – which you are – but you, in a way, glorify underage sex.
You know what I have to say to that?
Get the fuck out of my gene pool. You are a disgusting, twisted, backwards “human being” that doesn’t deserve to post her shit on the Internet. You also have a great disrespect for men. You sell them as little more than sex objects and this Alexis is little more than a male whore who has no identity or will of his own. As a matter of fact, this accurately describes you. It’s one thing for me to flame slash stories; it is another matter when there is a man you keep describing as a BOY, because you get turned on by that. You seem like the type to stash pornographic child images on their computer, and don’t try to deny it.
This? This is disgusting. And most of all – YOU wrote this. YOU posted it. YOU thought about it, so don’t you dare say that if people don’t like it they should shut up. I bet if the genders were reversed and this was an underage girl that Palpatine was going after, you’d be singing a whole ‘nother showtune, because girls are sacred like that, right? I use this argument a lot and it sure damn works, because it just shows how completely simple lackwits like you are.
So, not only do you glorify a dangerous and unhealthy lifestyle, you are glorifying male shaming and turning them into whores, almost as your way of getting revenge against them.
This was not Palpatine, and your Alexis just serves to make him a glorified paedophile. I don’t care if you write him as twenty; since you keep using boy, I am forced to assume this man is obviously sold as a youthful thing to be ravaged. Your full-length story “Alexis” is NOTHING but this weak and empty character serving your sexual desires, because you are just that pathetic as a person. You have zero respect for things that are not yours (canon), you have zero respect for dignity, and most of all, you have zero respect for men. You are a misandrist and have lowered them to little more than dogs who like to have sex with children. Add on to the fact that the Emperor is homosexual for absolutely no reason at all other than the fact that the author finds that hot (and she finds other old men paired with younger boys hot) and her readers do too.
I have very little respect for people like you. You are a paedophilic piece of shit that is no doubt a disgusting person in real life. Deny it as you wish, but I can tell what someone is like through their writing, and you, my dear, are one sick bitch.
| LLL chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
How did I miss this one? Palpatine's voice here is perfect. So well written, and nary a mistake. You really can just totally believe that this is the character.
I have to go read the rest of Alexis now...
So glad you're still writing Palpatine!
| masterdisk chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
that was scary... ;D
reading the chap from another POV was really interesting!