|Reviews for The Cookie Jar|
| Patton chapter 1 . 7/26
It's always good to see you writing again I love this story you've really given this fandom new life I was also wondering if you would accept prompts and when we will new installments of whispers of the gods and the outpost
| Cormag Ravenstaff chapter 29 . 7/24
Your understanding of children never ceases to make me smile and cheer me up
| TykkiMikk chapter 29 . 7/24
i wish i had a active imagination like that when i was a kid this was simply great to read it defiantly lifted my sour mood up a bit. Thank you.
| Happy1K1nob1 chapter 28 . 6/14
This series has been pretty amazing, and I have certainly enjoyed pretty much the entire thing. I'd definitely love to see more here, and in Ordinary Heros, and so on.
Because honestly? I find a whole lot of your stuff really fun. :)
| Happy1K1nob1 chapter 27 . 6/6
This one has to be one of the most (if not *the* most) hilarious things you have ever written! I really enjoyed this one. :)
| Happy1K1nob1 chapter 21 . 4/22
This was an amazing chapter. I loved it and I was smiling all the way through. Thank you so much.
| haemokin chapter 28 . 4/21
Keep it up!
Oh,and, just promoting, is it possible for the children(around 7) ask the parents how are babies made?The reactions will be epic,their answers will be priceless.I can't remember if it's already done,but if it isn't,give it some consideration.
| Lenny mosca chapter 26 . 4/17
I know this is a really stupid question in New bodhum you do know is actually on the beach and there's no pizza places on Gran Pulse maybe you should play the Final Fantasy 13 trilogy pack and please whatever you do don't take things on our world and thrown into they world and before you say you being really you're creative not being creative you taking things from our world and throwing it into the world things that already exists if you actually being really creative it'll come up on things that were in there a world like an idea a flan cone behemoth burgers those are just a few suggestions
| Seeker of the Skies chapter 15 . 3/10
That chapter was positively adorable, and I have to agree with what you said in your authors note, Snow would be a wonderful father.
| lennymosca chapter 15 . 3/7
you claim that you finished your story on Final Fantasy 13 how to loosen your story like seen a reference the event happened on Gran Pulse or the purge I already know the answer could you taking a characters from Final Fantasy 13 on your lifestyle or family members you know friends as of writer disingenuous the mislead people are you writing something cuz now where in the story the events of the Final Fantasy 13 2 hanging in the edge does s at Lake brusha the vile peaks the Paramecium the only thing I have heard you talking about was Ragnarok one of the transgression you made references to it about how goddess of death free crystal sleep nt you make those references then you're not copying the end of our fantasy 13 you write your own story about your family incorporate fictitious couches is you and your and that is disingenuous so you want to take place at the end of it then do it
| Lenny mosca chapter 12 . 3/7
so you know about your family and use in Final Fantasy 13 is a backdrop of the story the story based on Final Fantasy 13 in the aftermath of lightning return then go and do that please don't do that it doesn't disservice as a writer when you do stuff like that irate about your family or what about Final Fantasy 13 don't do both as always you never played the game you just look at the names and references but the characters is a Diana and her sister not bad but I think to screw Baker story if you go back at the plane Final Fantasy 13 and make this the aftermath of lightnings return and just so you know Sarah is dead so she can't be in the story play all 3 games and you'll see what I mean just try to keep that in mind but the stories are not bad so just tweak it a little bit
| Lenny Mosca chapter 11 . 3/7
No electricity in new Bodhum is on a beach front property you really need to play the damn game
| lenny Mosca chapter 9 . 3/7
just so you know in Final Fantasy 13 2 New bodhum all it is is a beachfront property. before you embark Final Fantasy 13 maybe should play the game and not just one all three Final Fantasy 13 games single back and we wait your story just my suggestion that's what a real writer.
| Happy1K1nob1 chapter 11 . 2/18
you know, there are days when I'm sure my face will fall off because I'm smiling too much at your stuff. :)
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 28 . 2/17