|Reviews for The Cookie Jar|
| Reality check chapter 11 . 5/31
You should make the story take place at the end of Lightnings Return postgame fanfare also you must take serah farron out of your story serah farron is not the real she was part of the chaos at lightning fight against the Sanctum in the final fight on Eden the chaotic Yeul she was part of it when serah farron died and Dodge young boy had the crystal shattered by orphan at the end of Final Fantasy 13 the energy you saw after the crystals Shadow with Souls of both Dodge and serah farron at the same time Yeul was there chaotic Yeul and when that Yeul die some of the chaotic energy flouted out with that merged with the Echoes of serah farron and Dodge but they're not really dodged or serah farron they're just Echoes of people who died that's why serah farron how the eyes of the goddess Dodge have some of the power to but because he was a boy he did not inherit the eyes of the goddess but he inherit her power to teleport wherever she wanted to go by thinking about it that's how him and his father ended up in serendipity he want to see a big bunch of chocobos and that was his first thought yes I know what you're probably thinking how would he know that if he was just an echo the reason for that is crazy I could have it whatever memories left behind by the person who died so some of it was him and some of it wasn't latched onto enough of the echo of the individual passed on to quit just enough of a hint the full someone that's why the chaotic energy is so unpredictable but serah farron died a thousand years ago as the dog and a chaotic chaos right before lightning managed to get them to the new undo the damage she pulled back the hands of time and create a new unseen realm Nova chrysalia became the new unseen Realm and you turn back the hands of time before the chaos around affected Gran pulse and that is where the oven the story and that is why I said it would not be returned to life and your story if you want to be a true to the story this will take place at the Final Fantasy 13 Lightnings Return thank you and if you don't do it then I will have a nice
| Terrian10 chapter 29 . 5/9
Man it's been while a while since I came back to this story sad it hasn't updated but netherless it let me forget about my problems for the day now I can sleep thanks for the story
| ServeMeTheSky chapter 29 . 1/7
I love reading these little snippets into the future lives of the FF XIII gang. I like the idea that after they save the world, they can all settle down and have simple lives and look after their families. These stories are so cute.
| Seeker of the Skies chapter 29 . 11/19/2015
Fun chapter. Just about everything Diana does is hilarious though.
| Guest chapter 26 . 11/19/2015
Interesting chapter. It's nice seeing the light shown on the younger sisters, considering how much I love Diana.
| Seeker of the Skies chapter 16 . 11/7/2015
I haven't read fan-fiction for a while since I've been busy with school, and this was a great way to get back into your stories. I've always loved them and a crazy Diana is always fantastic. That and the idea of Vanille bugging a school dance and Hope performing back ground checks on everyone. That one made me laugh.
another funny thing is that I'm behind in this story but had no idea what chapter I was up to. Considering last chapter was the one where all of Vanille and Hope's children were introduced I think I fluked it and clicked the right one right off the bat.
| Patton chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
It's always good to see you writing again I love this story you've really given this fandom new life I was also wondering if you would accept prompts and when we will new installments of whispers of the gods and the outpost
| Cormag Ravenstaff chapter 29 . 7/24/2015
Your understanding of children never ceases to make me smile and cheer me up
| TykkiMikk chapter 29 . 7/24/2015
i wish i had a active imagination like that when i was a kid this was simply great to read it defiantly lifted my sour mood up a bit. Thank you.
| Happy1K1nob1 chapter 28 . 6/14/2015
This series has been pretty amazing, and I have certainly enjoyed pretty much the entire thing. I'd definitely love to see more here, and in Ordinary Heros, and so on.
Because honestly? I find a whole lot of your stuff really fun. :)
| Happy1K1nob1 chapter 27 . 6/6/2015
This one has to be one of the most (if not *the* most) hilarious things you have ever written! I really enjoyed this one. :)
| Happy1K1nob1 chapter 21 . 4/22/2015
This was an amazing chapter. I loved it and I was smiling all the way through. Thank you so much.
| haemokin chapter 28 . 4/21/2015
Keep it up!
Oh,and, just promoting, is it possible for the children(around 7) ask the parents how are babies made?The reactions will be epic,their answers will be priceless.I can't remember if it's already done,but if it isn't,give it some consideration.
| Lenny mosca chapter 26 . 4/17/2015
I know this is a really stupid question in New bodhum you do know is actually on the beach and there's no pizza places on Gran Pulse maybe you should play the Final Fantasy 13 trilogy pack and please whatever you do don't take things on our world and thrown into they world and before you say you being really you're creative not being creative you taking things from our world and throwing it into the world things that already exists if you actually being really creative it'll come up on things that were in there a world like an idea a flan cone behemoth burgers those are just a few suggestions
| Seeker of the Skies chapter 15 . 3/10/2015
That chapter was positively adorable, and I have to agree with what you said in your authors note, Snow would be a wonderful father.