|Reviews for The Cookie Jar|
| pastelstrawberry chapter 13 . 2/20
I'm dying this is too cute the cleaning day I can't
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 16 . 2/17
Awesome chapter I love it.
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/17
How do you picture Lightning & Co reacting to Fang landing in hospital, be it through sickness or injury?
| megamar chapter 16 . 2/17
Can snoring be cute? I had bad experiment with them and its definitely not cute.
Background checks, that's coool
wish I can see Fang and Lighting try to scare their daughters girls friend
thanks for the story
| Silvercrystal.ct chapter 16 . 2/16
Another chapter and another glimpse into a truly wonderful world. While it's not really helpful to simply say "yet another great (funny, smile inducing) chapter" I have ran out of ways to explain how much I enjoy your work without saying the same thing again and again
| RememberStars chapter 16 . 2/16
Why do I have a feeling that Lightning and Fang are going to covertly spy on that dance. Because that is something they totally would do. Anyway, I've finally come to the conclusion that Averia's mysterious Girl Friend is... Wait for it... Yuna! Which I finally arrived to this conclusion after months of studying up on Final Fantasy (I've only played XII) and re reading your chapters to see who has been mentioned. For example Aerith and Tifa were mentioned earlier as being Averia's teacher and friend when she was in elementary school, and Yuffie (being too similar to Diana) wouldn't be a good fit especially with the jokes about her 'sister' issues. Which leaves (of the well known Final Fantasy female characters based on the assumption that this character is not an OC but a character who has appeared in the Final Fantasy series) Yuna. Well there is also Rikku, but my monies on Yuna.
| Oaden chapter 16 . 2/16
We are never finding out who Averia is dating are we?
| Xianit chapter 15 . 1/30
I loved this. Family stuff, so cute!
Diana is finally taller than Averia. Good for her. Though Averia is still the older sister.
The second snippet was my favorite. Fang and Light are awesome, but I still love Hope and Vanille, so it was nice to hear about them and their kids, too.
I loved the Villiers' snippet too. A little more insight into Alyssa and Ice.
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 15 . 1/29
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/29
I really like this chapter ecspecially now that Diana's taller and van and hopes kids are cute but I also miss your stories that has more of lightning and fang in them, I'm not complaining I love all your stories but I like those a lit too
| DarkVega1 chapter 15 . 1/29
Haaaaaaa I love ur stories please post more chp. Can't wait for it
Thanks for your hard work
| Tear of Light chapter 14 . 1/19
This was a very sweet chapter. I enjoyed reading about all the little ones. :)
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/5
I am absolutely in love with this series along with a lot of your other final fantasy 13 fan fic on a related note when's the next chapter of whisper of the Gods it's very well written the story is like cross between Greek mythology and game of thrones mixed with a chunk of Skyrim keep writing raziel I'm eagerly awaiting updates to your ff13 fan fics
| Xianit chapter 14 . 1/5
More kids! Yay!
Lots of introductions here. And that wasn't even all of them. Really looking forward to the Christmas story, Averia's girlfriend and Hope and Vanille's two boys!
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 14 . 1/1