Reviews for Snare
SatinCoveredSteel chapter 12 . 6/18/2013
Yep, Bella certainly needs a moment. It's a lot to take in, a lot to deal with!

I like the glimpse of Bella and Garrett we see in this chapter, and also what she says to him at his gravestone. I also like the shared pain of Edward and Bella: why were their loved ones taken from them.
CindyWindy chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
So Bella finally gets from Edward the answer she's been seeking, but it's understandably a lot to take in.

Edward wasting away in that cage, longing for the forest and freedom, is heartbreaking.

Thanks for sharing your writing, Raum!
Twiggalina chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
Great chapter!
Poor Bella indeed:(
withany chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
Ah, now we're getting to the nitty gritty in more than one way. Good to see Edward starting to fall for Bella, although it'll take a bit for her to respond, I expect, because of her grief over her mum and Garrett.
I loved the twist about the murders being done by a copycat killer, with just the first & last being a vamp. I wonder whether it'll tip the balance with Charlie's actions at some point?
How did the copycat killer know the vampire did the first murder? Or didn't he/she?
This is a great mystery story.
twiannfav chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
I’m getting quite anxious for poor Edwards situation.
He is imprisoned knowing there is no hope and almost being humiliated by having to drink human blood.
He is being judged prejudicially by even Bella who he has grown very fond of and is his only light in a very dark tunnel. xxx
amberkey chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
Massive love for the update!
bklover08 chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
Mari, you are torturing me! I love it anyway, so keep on giving us the little glimpses of his/her background and thoughts... ;)
parkesy23 chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
intriguing as always. loveit
ethelouise chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
This might be a good time for Edward to escape to follow Bella and explain. Thanks for the update.
LBelle chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
As usual, answer questions but leave me with more. I love it.
roxiegirl chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
Thank you! So Garrett. He cheated on her? I will be patient! Awesome chapter. I wouldnt have guessed the killer was human!
Bow to your sensei chapter 12 . 6/17/2013 sounds like Garrett might have had a hand in his own demise.

Poor Bella. And poor Edward too.
jmolly chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
Aargh. They aren't getting very far. I hope Ed does talk to Charlie. I'm interested to know why Ed knows so much about the murderer. Were he and Carlisle hunting him?
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
My heart is STILL breaking for Edward...:(
medward chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
Garrett sounds like a suicide. It also sounds like he had a girlfriend in Chicago and just wasn't honest with Bella. I am still hoping for a HEA Raum!
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