Reviews for Fractured Mask
ejndfijefnikjef chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
i really love your story...im really mad at tsunade...ughhh...she's a ******
alleemaria chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Wow... I really like this fanfic... And dunno why, but I find it kind of deep... Well done in any case ;)
Ms. Ashy chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Although short, this piece was fantastic. The emotions felt so raw in both parties-I almost cried. Tsunade, although brutal, appeared very real in her sorrowful determination, and the burning unrequited love on Jiraiya's part is so heart wrenching. Awesome short piece!
xSmittenKittenx chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Tsunade is... I apologize for being frank, but a bitch. Loving someone to the point where they are your everything is an amazing, rare thing. To trample all over those feelings is paramount to murder. If you give someone your heart and they throw it away, it'd be nicer to simply kill them.

Poor Jiraiya x_x
Ariel D chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Oh, she's brutal. Poor Jiraiya!

I'm glad to see someone deal with the concept that Tsunade walked out on her village.