|Reviews for A Loyal Son|
| greenwings33 chapter 3 . 1/2
Puhlease update soon!
I love your descriptive writing, it isn't overwhelming, but lets me picture everything.
I just reread this, so pretty please update soon!
| paracuties chapter 4 . 1/2
WHY DID YOU STOP WRITING THIS. :(
This is really good! For some reason I only read one chapter and I feel like I reviewed that one chapter-but then I didn't read the rest? And it says that this story was updated sometime in February, and I didn't even watch Blue Exorcist until...September 2013? Somewhere around that. Confused.
And the characters' development is going well so far too! And then you stop writing. -_- Mad. Madmadmad.
Please, please keep writing this sweet story!
| EpicAsianOrangeTiger26 chapter 4 . 12/24/2013
Will you continue to update cause I really am starting to enjoy this story.
| greenwings33 chapter 4 . 12/10/2013
We really need... a catalyst?
Not sure how to describe this though.
Maybe a badly injure Rin or such.
Sympathy? Realization that Rin isn't that bad.
By the way, will he have nightmares? That's a good way to get sympathy and such.
Your attention to detail is quite astounding! You have just the right amount of description: so that we can picture the events without being drowned.
| yay-for-names chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
*reads about Rin cleaning erasers* *goes into sneezing fit* I must have sneezed five times. I can't wait to see more this is really good!
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/11/2013
This story is very good please update
| Solunar chapter 4 . 6/24/2013
I enjoyed the story and figured I should show my appreciation.
| silblack chapter 4 . 3/2/2013
I like the story line it very realistic in my opinion
| A Shoulder To Lean On chapter 4 . 3/1/2013
I really like your story! Please continue it as soon as possible! :)
| OoOXylionOoO chapter 4 . 2/27/2013
IT goes really slow ...
Please a little action we become bored here...
| OoOXylionOoO chapter 2 . 2/27/2013
This is Great :D
| OoOXylionOoO chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Good chapter :D
REally good writing thought :D
| wildface97 chapter 4 . 2/27/2013
This was just- ffff I have no words to describe! Epic! Brilliant!
And EEEEEEEEEE KURO YAY
We need Kuro in every chapter! *le gasp* maybe he could help Rin on a mission like he does in the Kyoto Arc :D
You describe the characters so well, and Rin's senses were cool.
I laughed when he sniffed Izumo's hair. Then I laughed again when she realised he had sniffed her hair XD
Your vocabulary is out of this world! Uwaah, I wish my English was this good ;3;
You MUST continue! Let's hope some more of his classmates start interacting with Rin. I feel sorry for him ;3;
But Izumo company's good too! I find Rin and Izumo's "relationship" is quite underlooked most of the time. lthough she hates everyone and whatnot, I think these two are kinda good friends ewe
Right, it's almost midnight, I have tonsillitis and a sniffly nose, and I have school in the morning so I need to go XD
If my review makes no sense, it's perfectly fine. A sick me doesn't make much sense usually, so, yeah.
Until next time!
| Eve chapter 4 . 2/25/2013
I love this story, its one of the first Blue Exorcist stories that I've found that is actually pretty good. :) I'm so excited to see what happens next. Just some random input, but could you possibly have like hurt!Rin and the twins bonding at some point? There is so little of that on this website and I would love to read some. Can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work.
| AkumanoshippoNiamh chapter 4 . 2/25/2013
Oooh ... I bet it was Amaimon. I must ask how do you write such long chapters ... you are truly gifted my friend :3 Hope to see another update soon *gives you a plate of cookies made by Rin* ENJOY!